It's the year 1554 and Equestria's science has been improved by the invention of the drone. Now Equestria looks towards the stars and the urge for space travel is strong, but space travel can be dangerous so they decide take robotics to the next step, merging robotics with themselves.
-Error should be it's.
-Error should be has.
-It would look better if they was Equestria.
-Try this: "next step: merging robotics with themselves."
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Thank you! I always like others to help point out errors.
Amazing! I was searching for a fanfic based on this song... and Finally I found one! and the idea is amazing!
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Thanks!