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Uhh... I'm really creeped out right now. More so than that one chapter from The Apple Falls Far from the Tree.
Great. So much for sleeping.
Can't sleep, ponies will eat me.
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Or ponies will just French kiss you.
Saw TatzlJack image, went reading.
No TatzlJack, misleading image is misleading.
Will track to see what happen.
This is, interesting. I will have to read it!
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Given that this is chapter one and the main character nave only shown the tiniest symptoms of infection, I'd personally argue a bit of patience before calling 'foul' on that cover.
Personally I thought it a really solid start. For a zombie story it's near cliche' center as far as beginnings go, but that spin of 'with ponies instead' made it feel fresh and interesting again.
Especially the part with an earth pony tunneling around to get to people blind sided me completely, and this seems like it will be a really fun ride.
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Maybe the image show that the MC will become TatzlPonies?
i would call this judgement day but seeing how the ponies are not really killing anyone I'll call it love and tolerance day, but all jokes aside what the hell is up with the earth pony? it reminded me of tremors, and this is some really freaky shit, people and ponies dragging you out of your cars and French kissing you like they were straight out of Paris
5976123 and now i'm curious what in god's name is a TatzlJack, i'm going to have to look this up
well I know what it is now and I have to say
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Here
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Not enough.....I have seen enough shit that it wouldn't be called hentai anymore.
I feel like there needs to be a bit more embellishment to set the scene, specifically with the dream, but nice stuff so far. I'll keep an eye on this.
*Pops out eye and leaves it on the story*
Don't touch it.
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I know, reading this story made me really happy. I've high hopes for the future.
My favorite part this so far actually is the abortive dream with Luna where she gave up after a few seconds as a lost cause. That and the unicorn shooting itself.
Huh. I'm guessing the tunneler was a tatzlpony, otherwise the cover image doesn't make much sense. In any case, this is actually less disturbing than I thought it was going to be. I'm honestly relieved. Looking forward to more.
Oh, and one important note:
Either one of those needs to be changed, or the werehorse disease can cause gender changes.
hum not really sure about this one David.
I will be watching as I am sure you have a plan.
Harts Fire
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It's a bit premature, but [tatzlpony hint] this is a zombie genre homage of sorts, can you really not recall a zombie type that might fit the cover image?
Im interested....
5976478 The first one was a manager, fixed!
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5976382 I'll be doing my best to make it worth keeping an eye on. Do feel free to drop suggestions/ideas. I love feedback!
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I think that should be moved to the start of the next paragraph.
She...another
tried or started trying
colors, that's
horse-like...whinny
as fast as I could or full speed
We all knew where this was headed, but you never showed your protagonist deciding that that's what they were.
I could hear unsettling cracks and pops
magically-instant
Eh....I don't know about this....too soon to decide.
5977259 Thanks for the extreme typo hunting! I do hope you enjoy this story. It's nice having you about.
This is very similar to a story I'm writing called H1P1, heck the first chapter is called Day Zero, the difference is. I was first, and I have the protagonist as the first victim.
Well this is gonna be a bitch for the Military to clean up.
5990402 This is what they get the big bucks for!
the dead don't shuffle, they run!
immediately thought of this
6002338 They also whinny and snort sometimes.
Hmm... Psuedo horse zombie apocalypse is off to a bizzare start
Uh....o.O
I...Uh....
Huh, why does this remind me of Helix?
6094686 Never saw it before. Great minds?
I like it.
That is incredibly creepy, well done sir. Your imagination is deliciously nightmare inducing.
Que the Contagion music.
"How was school today sweetie?"
"I got kissed by a horse."
"...What?"
"Do we have any listerine?"
"...What?"
"Nevermind, I found it."
6510120 Surprisingly accurate.
It's called sexual assault. Rape is a form of sexual assault, but not all sexual assault is rape.
6685720 The more you know! Though I have a feeling she would figure that out after the freakout passed.
It is said that if you only need one chapter to get hooked
Well, you've got me hooked!
Interesting story here! ^^
6909382 Welcome to the end of days!
Um I might make a fanfic about a human who gets transported to equestria after the human race hit their limits in 2035 and oils and other fossil fuels ran out and it was apocalyptic
7144730 Get to writing! I do think a few like that have been scrawled, but everyone has their own take. This is mine, with humanity suffering a bit of a mistake, with ponies!
7144730 You could also add in water wars as an apocalypse factor, creating greater depth and originality to your story.
Ho boy here we go...
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Thou hast made us laugh.
The last line in this chaper is killing me. Its best to imagine it being said in the voice of Sean Connery.
Rereading this. I’m imagining a pony spinning a gun around, then shooting itself in the leg on accident.
This is a great story! (This is my second read through)
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Glad you're having a good time with it! Did you read the sequel?