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The Great Pony Bandits (Or how Braeburn saved the day)

Braeburn tells his grand tale of how he hurt his hoof! It involves bandits, stagecoaches, and a couple thousand bits. Only problem is Applejack knows Braeburn isn't telling the truth.

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Xtralife

Xtralife #1 · May 17th, 2015 · · ·

Not bad! It's pretty funny how AJ plays along with Braeburn while also calling him out on his lies. But I feel like Braeburn gave in too soon, and you need to add some more commas in your sentences. Keep it up!