Transported To Ponyland

by Melon Blast

2 - Arrival

Author's Note:

I have decided to continue the FIMfic. I am not giving up. Keep in mind this is my first time writing NOT for school so go easy on me here.

I woke up falling through what seemed to be a rainbow portal of sorts. I looked to my left and saw Zander next to me. I screamed, astonished that he's still alive.

"Wha-how did you NOT die!?" I yelled at him.

"I dunno. Probably because logic," he replied with a smirk. He's always one to joke around.

I studied the rainbow a bit more closely this time. It happened to be made of solid material.

This intrigued me. Rainbows are actually rays of light bouncing off of water. A solid rainbow wouldn't be possible.

Yet it was real, as real as Call of Duty, as everything suddenly went black.

I awoke in what seemed to be... Wait, it coudn't be. Fiarts a rainbow void, then a TREE BRANCH?
I studied myself, and fell off of the branch in shock. "Buck!"

I was a Pegasus filly. My fur was red, my mane was lime green, it's style being that of Fluttershy's. I had a tail the same color of my mane, looking like Rarity's instead. I had glasses and a flame pendant, both being blue, along with my eyes.

I looked up at Zander but I didn't see him.

I saw me as a unicorn filly with my fur/mane colors and mane/tail styles swapped.

I yelled at him from below, causing him to shriek in fright and fall. "Wake up, sleepyhead!"

"Hey, what was that for?" He protested.

"Nevermind that. Do you know where we ar-?" I started when a figure suddenly interrupted me.

"Umm, excuse me, but you shouldn't be out here..." The feminine-at least it sounded feminine-voice inquired shyly, still making us run behind a random bush. "Sorry, I didn't mean to scare you..."

"It's okay," I apologized. "Say, do you know where we ar-"

"We're in the land of Equestria, home of many ponies and variants, like unicorns, Pegasi, and Alicorns," Zander blurted out.

"Will you give us a minute?" I asked the mare, dragging Zander behind a tree.

"We might need new identities..." I told Zander, but he immediately countered with "I already thought out our names. You're Melon Blast and I'm Potato Strike."

We shakily walked out from behind the trees and I told the lady "We should introduce ourselves. I'm Melon Blast, and this is Melon Strike. What's yours?"

"I-it's Fluttershy..." She responded looking at the ground.

"Nice to meet you Fluttershy-" I started, but Potato interrupted me, again, asking "Can you lead us to Ponyville?"

"Sure..." Fluttershy responded, and we started out journey in the magical land of Equestria, not knowing the importance of our presence. In fact, we thought we were the opposite of what we were. We thought we were unimportant side characters, yet we might as well be the most important of all.

Comments

[Skylarking the Stargazer]

6057107 ADHD is definitely a disorder that I'm going through in my life, attentive listening, memorizing and concentration are the obstacles that bring me down in high school.

[Flint-Lock]

(sigh) I know this must have seemed like a really cool idea at the time- some random kid and his friend get sent to Equestria for whatever reason- but here's the thing; this concept is stale. No, not stale. It's hard as a rock. There are hundreds of fics with this exact same premise; some guy/gal gets sent to Equestria by Celestia/Discord/ The Flying Spaghetti Monster, makes friends with the Mane 6/ the Princess/Tom, fights Lovecraftian horrors/Sombra/communism, and falls in love with Twilight/Celestia/The Smooze.
Sometimes an author manages to pull this off well. Emphasis on sometimes.

What you choose to do with this fic is up to you. You can continue it- I won't try to stop you- but don't expect a positive reception.

-Flint-Lock

[Maxes Altho]

6058938 I have yet to see someone write the Flying Spaghetti Monster, befriending Tom, Communism, and sweet slime love into a story...

[Flint-Lock]

6058953
Give it time.

[Mosqueefo]

I have lived all my life as a normal-well, mostly normal if you count Autism and ADHD-kid. That is, until my Call of Duty game sort of got... Corrupted

That explains a lot of things, autism and call of duty.

[Sdrawkcabsitxetsiht]

I love the Brony in Equestria genre. A brony gets sent to Equestria and doesn't care about never seeing his friends or family ever again.