108588 Yes, up to and including chapter 6. After that, I changed it because it no longer took place on the same day. Also, I think there was a different fic called Spike's Day Off too.
This is spacey! I've always wanted to see a little Rainbow X Spike, but it seems that there is about to be an ensuing wave of various clop scenes involving the two for me. Part of me can't wait.
I never was a big fan of Twilight x Spike. That's like dating your brother (I'm a girl, so maybe I think differently?). But you pulled it off, so great job!
116527 It's entirely possible that at some point there may be background characters involved, but I don't have anything specific planned yet. I do have a future chapter involving certain Wonberbolts planned though. (they're sort of background characters too... just named ones)
You're saying that you don't like Photo Finish? I don't think it's likely that she will ever be involved in this fic - at least not sexually. I can't promise anything though.
You have a sick twisted mind you know that? I may have a dirty mind, but from this fic, I think I've met my match. I nearly puked a little from this fic series.
118684 What exactly in chapter 14? I don't recall putting anything particularly kinky or dirty in it, except watersports (which I don't consider dirty anyway), which is quite prevalent in the entire fic. In fact, I'm pretty sure there is far more disgusting stuff in certain previous chapters, than in 14. (the part about Big Mac's sweaty asshole in chapter 11 comes to mind)
At first I was like but then I was like afterwards i was like but then i was like but then i thought which ruined everything .... why did I read this Oh yeah cause Ima baus that enjoys a story and doesnt clop so I must now leave here happy knowing twilight won't find me doing anything dirty in her memory spell Take it away big mac eeyup! pretty good story by the way, I find it weird that most clop-fics have better romance developement than fics purely aimed at romance developement, the whole, I just did all your friends and im sorry, situations they keep running into makes it difficult in some fics for the couple to actually forgive one, gives the story more emotion, way better than stories like: dash and pinkie fuck... THE END who needs that.... Wait just one minute... I just commented on a clop fic... oh god why ahh fuck it I don't give a shit
according to watersports anything, droughts are constantly a problem due to way to constant peeing. Needless to say, great, that coming from a person whos not really into watersports in my fics.
So this is the end?
That was unexpected, but not surprising in this story
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Nah, the story status still says incomplete. Spike's gonna have some more fun and sexual misadventures.
your gonna make a sequel right if you do post a link on this story
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No, it's not the end.
It didn't even say "THE END" at the end of the chapter.
Awesome ;) I never get tired of watersports, and as it seems the same goes for you as well.
Was that the last chapter or will there be more?
Wow, if everyone keeps complaining about watersports, write in a piss duel. that takes some higher level of class TwilightPsycho
I don't know why the hell I'm doing this, but I'm doing it...
*tracked*
NEVER cross the streams
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Yes, up to and including chapter 6.
After that, I changed it because it no longer took place on the same day.
Also, I think there was a different fic called Spike's Day Off too.
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I see someone got the reference.
Also: Is your body ready?
My body is ready.
right.....
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My good sir this fanfic is indeed marvelous please keep up the good work
Another great chapter. I will never get tired of pissing ponies, keep it up!
I want to see Twilight at some club meetings.
awesome, seriously, keep it up
wow this shit is so fucking unrealistic how can they piss 30 times in the same hour without drinking anything
fucking unrealistic 0.2/43 shitty ass fanfic never reading this shit again
on the other hand your writing is beatiful and i love the references you drop around
keep doing this shit man
Ah ha, ha, ha!
Knowing Twilight, she probably would do some sexual experiments with her magic.
Speaking of which, how about zero-g sex (and a horngasm so powerful that it's like a flashbang going off) thanks to levitation?
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2 != 30.
And it can be presumed that they both drank something earlier in the day, or the previous night.
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I seem to recall zero-g sex has been done already in a fic called Twi and Me.
I approve of this chapter.
I've been wondering...
...do you clop to your own work?
(No wrong answer)
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I don't clop to fics - not while reading them anyway.
And pretty much the only time I read my own fic is when I'm proofreading it.
So, no.
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Aww, yeah!
funny thing is after i had finished reading this i had a strange urge to pee
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You had to pee?
Oh man, this one of the funniest clopfics ever!!
So, RD is next pony Spike will bang? It will be funny if she ends up being the opposite of Fluttershy when it comes to sex
This is spacey! I've always wanted to see a little Rainbow X Spike, but it seems that there is about to be an ensuing wave of various clop scenes involving the two for me. Part of me can't wait.
Can you please hit the button that says a lit less fetish because i gaged while reading this
Can you make a RD x Spike?
I never was a big fan of Twilight x Spike. That's like dating your brother (I'm a girl, so maybe I think differently?). But you pulled it off, so great job!
Me gusta.
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Lol, next time, bring a bucket while reading, I just taped up that button so it could never be pressed again!
On-topic, finally got around to reading this chapter, another great one.
Hoping for more soon :D
Also, I lol'd much at this chapter X3
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Spike x RD = Next chapter.
As for Spike and Twilight's sort-of-sibling-esque relationship, that's part of the appeal. And thanks.
20$ says theres gonna be a 10 seconds flat referance in the next comic
Also do you think you might do Ditzy Doo or carrot top or any background characters? Ditzy fics are creepy if done wrong so i doubt it but just asking
Also last question, and also as a last request, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DONT PUT HER IN THE FIC *shivers*
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sry that last one wasent a question it was just a request.
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It's entirely possible that at some point there may be background characters involved, but I don't have anything specific planned yet.
I do have a future chapter involving certain Wonberbolts planned though. (they're sort of background characters too... just named ones)
You're saying that you don't like Photo Finish?
I don't think it's likely that she will ever be involved in this fic - at least not sexually.
I can't promise anything though.
You have a sick twisted mind you know that? I may have a dirty mind, but from this fic, I think I've met my match. I nearly puked a little from this fic series.
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And yet you read it?
By the way, if you don't mind me asking, what made you "nearly puke a little"?
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Ponies may nearly always be naked, but they aren't always wet in a steamy shower, looking sexy as hell.
118145 Ch. 14. The rest is okay, but dear Lord, this made me sick. The series isn't bad, but damn do you have a very dirty mind.
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What exactly in chapter 14?
I don't recall putting anything particularly kinky or dirty in it, except watersports (which I don't consider dirty anyway), which is quite prevalent in the entire fic.
In fact, I'm pretty sure there is far more disgusting stuff in certain previous chapters, than in 14. (the part about Big Mac's sweaty asshole in chapter 11 comes to mind)
JESUS CHRIST THERES MORE? ALRIGHT THEN CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!
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shitty ass fanfic never reading this shit again
LAYER!!! you read this because you like the content and you know it!!
STOP saying you don´t!!!
At first I was like
But then I was like
Now I'm like,
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:confound this dragon, he drives me to horngasms.
"While we wait for the tub to fill up, why don’t you rince me out?" - ORLY
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I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE
At first I was like but then I was like afterwards i was like but then i was like but then i thought which ruined everything .... why did I read this Oh yeah cause Ima baus that enjoys a story and doesnt clop so I must now leave here happy knowing twilight won't find me doing anything dirty in her memory spell Take it away big mac eeyup! pretty good story by the way, I find it weird that most clop-fics have better romance developement than fics purely aimed at romance developement, the whole, I just did all your friends and im sorry, situations they keep running into makes it difficult in some fics for the couple to actually forgive one, gives the story more emotion, way better than stories like: dash and pinkie fuck... THE END who needs that.... Wait just one minute... I just commented on a clop fic... oh god why ahh fuck it I don't give a shit
"he tried to summon forth his inner peace" ?? Kung Fu Panda ref.?
DAMMNNN NIGGA U HIGH?
according to watersports anything, droughts are constantly a problem due to way to constant peeing. Needless to say, great, that coming from a person whos not really into watersports in my fics.
Let's see...
Its 2:56 AM. I need to get to bed.
...
Fuck it, I'm reading more.
Y U MAKE THIS FIC SO GOOD?
its 4 in the morning why am i still reading this? im turning into pinkamena