Oh nice chapter. The dream was particularly funny, and it's so nice to see Twilight and Spike "getting along" so well. This was a long one too. Worth the wait for sure. Good job.
So, we're going to fill unicorn urine into bottles and sell it. You don't know why people would buy unicorn urine? Well, it's probably magical or something like that.
93663 You may just be on to something there. However, considering how common unicorns are in Equestria, there may not be much demand for it. If humans were involved though...
Not sure if it's fitting or not, but during the Twi/Spike section I had this playing http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgL2CZisFGc Worked wonderfully either way. These are like a little guilty pleasure, I have no idea why I like them. I just do :P
Damn, you couldn't have dragged it out a wee bit longer? I was all and I almost popped like But then the scene was over too quickly so I was like. Also I chafed for no reason now.godd job regardless
Wait, it's not completely over is it? I must know what happens next! Does spike keep getting with the others? Does Twilight join their sex club? I must know, man!
93880 What exactly were you expecting? Except for the piss part, that's what most clopfics are.
93941 Oh, that's a furry meme of some sort? Never heard of that before. Funny though.
93950 Not yet. I've had an RD chapter planned since the beginning though. It just hasn't come up yet. Most likely it will be the one after the next, unless I get the story tangled up in yet another multi-parter.
94218 That's a interesting, if kinda disturbing art.
94390 I'm pretty sure I've already said that there will be RD at some point. It just got pushed back because of changes to the original storyline I had in mind.
94857 No, as I've said before, there will be a Rainbow Dash chapter. It was originally planned to be much earlier, but got pushed back due to story changes.
95004 So far, she has simply been NotAppearingInThisFic. But yes, knowing RD, probably napping in AJ's apple trees or practicing flying tricks to impress the Wonderbolts.
95054 Actually, come to think of it, she did make a brief appearance in "Party Hardon", headbanging to Pinkie Pie's speed metal and getting knocked over by Twilight. MostlyNotAppearingInThisFic though.
there's a bunch of gay men posting pictures anout their masturbation habits relating text horses how nice.
btw you should consider adding some sort of conflict to the history so it gets more depth or something per ex maybe celestia charges twilight of pedofoalia and then flips the fuck out when she realizes everyone fucked spike
97054 I don't think gay men would bother reading this. After all, there isn't any gay action in it at all. I'm sure there are other fics for that.
As for the pedofoalia thing, it's already been done in another fic, called "Warming Up" if I recall correctly. Not gonna happen in this fic. If anything, I'm sure Celestia wouldn't mind getting a piece of the dragon herself.
I...I....I feel like I need to take a shower in tomato juice from imaging all the piss situations, but other than that, this was a fantastic read. Nice way to cater to all shippers.
It's always fun to see spike get some love! To be honest I didn't really expect it to be like this at first, then I saw watersport scene, and said . (I gots Watersports fetish, but not the creepy 'pee on everything you own' kind of way, I keep it secret)
"of ultimate destiny"
Oh nice chapter. The dream was particularly funny, and it's so nice to see Twilight and Spike "getting along" so well. This was a long one too. Worth the wait for sure. Good job.
Scream worthy of Marv FTW
So, we're going to fill unicorn urine into bottles and sell it. You don't know why people would buy unicorn urine? Well, it's probably magical or something like that.
93630
93640
Thanks. :D
93656
I just love that movie...
93663
You may just be on to something there.
However, considering how common unicorns are in Equestria, there may not be much demand for it.
If humans were involved though...
Not sure if it's fitting or not, but during the Twi/Spike section I had this playing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgL2CZisFGc
Worked wonderfully either way.
These are like a little guilty pleasure, I have no idea why I like them. I just do :P
93695
Wow. Strippershy, huh?
Never seen that one before.
Me gusta.
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and finally
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all thanks and courtesy to the internet.
I don't know if I should feel soo bad 4 like this fanfic soo much.
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Still keep up the good work my good sir.
93791
Yeah, I'm sure Twilight would have dragon dildos.
Assuming she had any dildos that is.
well this is where my time with this fanfic end. sadly i was hoping for somthing other than just "sex, piss and small story".
Dragon Dildos lulxxx <~~XXX is a dirty lulz immediately reminded me of Bad Dragon...gay furries *cringe*
anyways "Watersports" is still disgusting
No rainbow dash? damn it
Damn, you couldn't have dragged it out a wee bit longer? I was all and I almost popped like But then the scene was over too quickly so I was like. Also I chafed for no reason now.godd job regardless
Read entire series, didn't clop once. VICTORY IS MINE!
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need moar. i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd18/tailsfanatic/My%20Little%20Pony/reaction/131645991037.jpg
molestia likes this very much
Like a boss
MOAR PLEASE!
94218
*cough* ok H R Giger only perverted, can't really dig it but whatever
93950
"Until next chapter that is"
...or maybe not; it's TwilightPsycho's decision
Wait, it's not completely over is it? I must know what happens next! Does spike keep getting with the others? Does Twilight join their sex club? I must know, man!
93880
What exactly were you expecting?
Except for the piss part, that's what most clopfics are.
93941
Oh, that's a furry meme of some sort?
Never heard of that before. Funny though.
93950
Not yet. I've had an RD chapter planned since the beginning though. It just hasn't come up yet.
Most likely it will be the one after the next, unless I get the story tangled up in yet another multi-parter.
94124
Congratulations!
94165
For great justice!
94218
That's a interesting, if kinda disturbing art.
94390
I'm pretty sure I've already said that there will be RD at some point. It just got pushed back because of changes to the original storyline I had in mind.
94401
Did you miss the "(Well, until next chapter, anyway...)" after "THE END"?
No, it's not over. Not at all.
Not as long as there are more sexy ponies for Spike to bang, and more "experiments" for him and Twilight to do.
bravo :)
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another perfect twiXspike clopfic to the hall of fame
Happy End
And They Lived Happily Ever After
Epic Happy End
Luna joined them and the fun has been doubled
<ladies>
Another great chapter keep up the great work
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Proof that Princess Celestia Doesn't kill a pony when you clop.
So with that in mind, I say onto you my fellow bronies and pegasisters. CLOP, CLOP SO THAT PRINCESS CELESTIA MAY CUM WITH YOU!
Not a bad chapter to be honest. Though is this going to turn into a Spilight ship fic?
94841
If by that, you mean is it going to turn into a pure shipfic, or pure Spike x Twilight, then no.
Neither.
There will be more focus on Spike x Twilight for the next few chapters, but there will also be more chapters involving the other ponies.
94849 I hate to ask, but is Rainbow going to be out of this story?
94857
No, as I've said before, there will be a Rainbow Dash chapter.
It was originally planned to be much earlier, but got pushed back due to story changes.
This must never end
94912 Where HAS she been? Napping or something?
95004
So far, she has simply been NotAppearingInThisFic.
But yes, knowing RD, probably napping in AJ's apple trees or practicing flying tricks to impress the Wonderbolts.
95054
Actually, come to think of it, she did make a brief appearance in "Party Hardon", headbanging to Pinkie Pie's speed metal and getting knocked over by Twilight.
MostlyNotAppearingInThisFic though.
what the read did i just fuck
well..... what.... the..... fuck........ I came for story..... i left with 1 hand.......
95253
If you actually bothered to read all the way to chapter 13 you must've enjoyed it.
95254
What happened to the other?
95257
He obviously lost his hand after muriously fasturbating so much.
95063 Oh I must've missed that.
there's a bunch of gay men posting pictures anout their masturbation habits relating text horses
how nice.
btw you should consider adding some sort of conflict to the history so it gets more depth or something
per ex maybe celestia charges twilight of pedofoalia and then flips the fuck out when she realizes everyone fucked spike
97054
I don't think gay men would bother reading this. After all, there isn't any gay action in it at all.
I'm sure there are other fics for that.
As for the pedofoalia thing, it's already been done in another fic, called "Warming Up" if I recall correctly.
Not gonna happen in this fic. If anything, I'm sure Celestia wouldn't mind getting a piece of the dragon herself.
97664
The kinkiest clopfic ever written. I think.
If you find any kinkier ones, let me know, 'cause I wanna read them.
97685
That's an epic comic you got there. Wonder what the dad was doing looking at that suggestive screenshot...
97714
Hey, at least finish reading up to the actual clop before complaining about it.
(I dare you to read on )
97761
Enough with the excessive images... and please don't post the same thing multiple times.
98478
Why would you be telling your 13-year old sister about a clopfic?
93618
Ultimate Destiny? Oh god 4-festor hitsquads everywhere! RUN FOR (*insert god/godess here*) SAKE!
I...I....I feel like I need to take a shower in tomato juice from imaging all the piss situations, but other than that, this was a fantastic read. Nice way to cater to all shippers.
Tracking. Keep up the good work.
101757
I wasn't really trying to cater to anyone in particular. I just happen to like all the mane-6 very much.
Thanks though.
101810
How so?
It's always fun to see spike get some love! To be honest I didn't really expect it to be like this at first, then I saw watersport scene, and said . (I gots Watersports fetish, but not the creepy 'pee on everything you own' kind of way, I keep it secret)