Well done here! There was no watersporting, but regular sex for the most part. I'm glad to see a change in pace actually from you. I have to say that you did a great job on this clop scene and this was the best chapter of the fic series. The cliffhanger at the end is suspenseful and now we need to see what will happen to Spike. Will Rainbow save him?
it would seem that writer has very defined urine obsession, which I find somewhat hard to digest Never the less, all the stories are most amusing, and this last chapter is the best Keep on typing, good writefag.
Spike can't die yet , he still needs to screw celestia luna did say celestia had more. Time. To ready . ANd then after that unless u wanna stop u can have the ultimate sex party thrown by pinkie pie with everypony u did. The perfect ending :D.
You know, I read these stories, and I think to myself "Huh. That was pretty good!" and then I get to the part where they piss all over each other, and the story is ruined.
151481 If you aren't aroused by piss, then you aren't strictly speaking the target demographic of this fic. One of the main reasons I started writing this was the severe lack of watersports/urination fics around.
It is of course your choice to make whether you want to read the story or not, but don't ask me to cater to the mainstream by writing pure vanilla sex. If I wanted to do that, I would have done so, but I don't. As it is, this fic has already gained far more popularity than I ever expected it to.
As for the sex scenes being a bit repetitive, I'm aware of that, but that has nothing to do with the piss, and the piss isn't going anywhere.
I am part of your target demographic, and never have I read such an amazing series. This is truly the finest work Ive ever read, and I thank you so much for writing this. Its hardly repetitive in my eyes, and keeps things fresh. Keep it up! You sir, are the best clopfic writer ever. Period. Thank you so much for all you've done!
Momentarily paralyzed in fear as they plummeted towards the ground, he felt his bladder releasing, his now rapidly softening dick ejecting its contents deep into Rainbow Dash’s throat.
Well done here! There was no watersporting, but regular sex for the most part. I'm glad to see a change in pace actually from you. I have to say that you did a great job on this clop scene and this was the best chapter of the fic series. The cliffhanger at the end is suspenseful and now we need to see what will happen to Spike. Will Rainbow save him?
First!
Sorry don't get to do that often...
Anyways this calls for a certain phrase.
"Death bu Snu-Snu!" Fucked up....Cool way to go!
This is what Spike was like when he was falling.
Wait, supersonic aerial sex? Yeah! Spike, you awesomely virile dragon! You are made of win!
Oh, I loved the image of bridled Rainbow Dash. More bridles, please.
And finally, Spike has to survive so he can have more adventures with the club.
YES! YES! google.com/imgres?um=1&hl=en&sa=N&rlz=1C1GGGE_enDE413DE413&biw=1366&bih=610&tbm=isch&tbnid=f-bd3PqO0eeIUM:&imgrefurl=http://www.narutoforums.com/showthread.php%3Ft%3D744565%26page%3D3&docid=CYXFn3BL-nRHJM&imgurl=http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr87/crazzup/BisonYes.jpg&w=469&h=320&ei=os0YT5LLCLOH0QGMr4C9Cw&zoom=1&iact=rc&dur=282&sig=112662058733407123660&page=1&tbnh=123&tbnw=181&start=0&ndsp=20&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:0&tx=45&ty=96
this says it all
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that is all keep up the good work my good sir.
Cliffhangers ftw.
You had me at "Spike's Sexual"...
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pfffttt HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
but but what happens next!?!?!
Is there a better way to die?
Bueno...
Someone please provide the RD Bueno image for me! I don't know how!
you wouldnt have got the "POMF" idea from a post i put about a month ago on your last chapter, would it? here! ill put the pic in again :)i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss356/Manicdill/7123-memepomfrainbow_dashwingbonerwing_boner.png
Honestly, not a bad way to go - that said, i pictured the crotchety old man waving his hoof at the clouds and had myself a hardy chuckle. thanks.
fuck you sir. i mean that in the best way possible.
"He wiped the drops off with his finger and sniffed it. Urine? "
Ponies don't have fingers.
The story is still hillarious
it would seem that writer has very defined urine obsession, which I find somewhat hard to digest Never the less, all the stories are most amusing, and this last chapter is the best Keep on typing, good writefag.
Well that's one way to join the mile high club
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Yeah, bridles are sexy.
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Not specifically, no. The "pomf" joke is pretty old, and I've seen it many times before.
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Fixed.
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It's called urolagnia.
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Indeed.
145459 +1 ponynetz to u good sir
also, this is an amazing story, and my namesake and i approve
Ponies in bridles is so hawt.
But the cliffhanger! The cliffhanger man! I'm gonna ahev to find you and hurt-hug you. D:<
Nuclear launch detected!
*The impact*
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All my DT's died...TT
Spike can't die yet , he still needs to screw celestia luna did say celestia had more. Time. To ready . ANd then after that unless u wanna stop u can have the ultimate sex party thrown by pinkie pie with everypony u did. The perfect ending :D.
147404 lolillneverknow
You douche why you copy me thats MY name
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.... Why me?
You know, I read these stories, and I think to myself "Huh. That was pretty good!" and then I get to the part where they piss all over each other, and the story is ruined.
Another great chapter my friend, great chapter indeed
I would imagine wingboners exist to prevent EXACTLY THIS from happening.
To all who complained about watersports, did you even read the description?
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If you aren't aroused by piss, then you aren't strictly speaking the target demographic of this fic.
One of the main reasons I started writing this was the severe lack of watersports/urination fics around.
It is of course your choice to make whether you want to read the story or not, but don't ask me to cater to the mainstream by writing pure vanilla sex.
If I wanted to do that, I would have done so, but I don't. As it is, this fic has already gained far more popularity than I ever expected it to.
As for the sex scenes being a bit repetitive, I'm aware of that, but that has nothing to do with the piss, and the piss isn't going anywhere.
You know what I really love about this? The fact that you openly admit you do this for the watersports-department.
Honesty and tolerance at it's finest!
I am part of your target demographic, and never have I read such an amazing series. This is truly the finest work Ive ever read, and I thank you so much for writing this. Its hardly repetitive in my eyes, and keeps things fresh. Keep it up! You sir, are the best clopfic writer ever. Period.
Thank you so much for all you've done!
Is it bad that if I was Spike, I would be all: "You shut your whore mouth about your lesbian crushes while I'm trying to bang you!"
Eh. I'll read this chapter tomorrow.
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Second, actually
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Lulz
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Moar lulz
since when do ponys actually have boobs now anyway? i know they have tits, but not boobs.
I can just imagine him plumetting to his death screaming "IT WAS WORTH IIIIIT!!!!"
Aww man!
I think someone likes urine a little too much...
And everything was going so well too...