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Ignore that notification about me adding this to Comment Reviews, I misclicked while trying to downvote.
Input on why you down voted might be helpful that way I can Mayhaps write better in the future
Might wanna clean that up a bit, for starters. For example, learn when to divide up your sentences, 'cause right now, it looks like one massive run-on sentence.
Well metroid once I get access beyond my iPhone again I will try cleaning up the base descriptions abit, thank you for your imput
its slightly unamusing the lack of a word counter method when trying to write a new chapter and trying to make it longer then the last.....but third chapter is up, feel free to enjoy
I like it! Makes me miss fluffy!!
For those who may ask fluffy is one of ebonys nicknames.....
Somehow exploding changelings super stuffed on the essence of joy I figured might make someone unhappy
i expanded abit onto chapter 2,3,and 7, and hope people enjoy chapter 8s direction
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yes i know its a rather long introductory sentence, now that i got a new comp once i get time i plan to refine it abit gog toxic, it just takes time.
i spent the past two weeks adding to the existing chapters and doing some correctional tweaking, hopefully this will make some happier, but despite how popular clopfics are there is no way in hell this will have any form of clop short of ebs lust aka blue gum....just stating that ahead of time...
my fathers currently in the hospital for awhile, so any updating of this fimfic will be slowed down greatly for a time.
from all the downvotes i am getting a feeling people hate my story, but without proper imput beyond being told my introduction was long, no ones spoken up what they really dislike -.-
its my first story, i am trying to do a good job with it, but without reader imput, i cant get very far............
for those new to the story or returning, this newest chapter explains a lot about ebony as a character and OC
What is this from as I googled aol rpverse and got nothing
8083806 aol rpverse refers to the role play that was in aol chat rooms both private and public since 1995 and a little before 95. Ebony has been rped by me on aol since 95 so I know it's been around at least that long. For a good idea of groups involved kingdom of goldenmyst, kingdom of kavanagh are two of many groups that existed over the past two decades. Another long standing group is aorg aka associated original rhydin guilds.....nowadays what rp remains is in private chats for the actual good rp
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Where can I find that?
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Primarily it's about the self-insert OC being put into the show as some super special gamechanger, I would wager. You're putting pointless whining in the story description too, and your description itself doesn't lend to what sort of story this is.
No one is going to know what an AOL RPverse is. Hell, I grew up with AOL and I don't recall any oddities back then, and I'm going to assume it's not actually to do with America Online but something else entirely.
It's a bloody mess, anyone that sees it from the outside looking in is going to dislike it on principle.
I'd suggest deleting it, reformatting, getting an editor, and having them assist you in writing out a competent blurb and description.
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draxisweb.com/dwp/remembering-rhydin-what-is-rhydin
above is a link where another individual actually talks about what the rhydinverse was
also for another reference
https://www.reddit.com/r/RhyDin/comments/b1mdax/what_is_rhydin/
i would supply the old kogm website but it got flooded by spam botters....-.-
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while i appreciate your imput, its not pointless whining as you so eloquently put it, i merely got tired of people downvoting constantly with no input
as someone trying to write a story, how would you feel if more then half of the negative votes you got, you had no input whatsoever
it would frankly be very frustrating
overall the bottem two updates on the description i planned to remove in the near future as it stands, and finding an editor isnt always the easiest thing for everyone todo.....as for knowing what the aolverse is, if you didnt interact alot with the rp element of the chatrooms, its not very surprising you would have no idea what i was referring to despite using aol.....
most just used aol for email, and since the chatroom rp aspect went downhill back in 2016ish, now thats mostly all its used for other then news unless one goes to private rooms
https://bkingdomofrevenland.runboard.com/ was a decent sized example of one group