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Brony_noumber_997846

Brony_noumber_997846 #1 · Mar 20th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Love the story so far, and I would like to see more. Really Really really really like the way you put in how realistic one would react to the situations Booker is put in. "Slaps ass for emphasis" XD

Wertmon505

Wertmon505 #2 · Oct 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter 2 ~ Know Your Place ·

This story dead or what? because I'd really like to see more of this

Cholcer

Cholcer #3 · Oct 2nd, 2015 · · · Chapter 2 ~ Know Your Place ·

6481148 Unclear. I started it out, but it didn't receive a lot of support, and I work so much that it kinda was more work then reward. I'll consider another chapter I guess... but no promises. Also I struggle writing the smut part even though that its vital to the story line.

Wertmon505

Wertmon505 #4 · Oct 2nd, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ~ Know Your Place ·

6483131 I suggest getting a chapter or two out, and attaching this story to a group or three, this will get you more exposure and, hopefully, more support. Also, there are whole groups dedicated to helping burgeoning writers grow. Don't get discouraged, this story is great and I'd hate to see it die before it really got going.