A mysterious New pony shows up late a night in ponyville. This mare turns out to be Lunar Dash, cousin of Rainbow Dash, and she brings news of her nearing demise. Throughout the following day Rainbow Dash seems to be avoiding her, but why?
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Hullo! I'm your friendly grammar/spellchecker!
limp?
lowercase.
pin, perhaps?
I know, I'll
mare? and no period needed between as and Fluttershy
that's just a weird sentence.
"Here smell this"
I'll do the rest later.
Disclaimer: I do not own My Little Pony or any of its characters; the rights of which belong to Hasbro and DHX. I do, however, own my original character.
'mon, do you really think you need to write that? Seriously? We're on a fanfiction site dedicated to My LIttle Pony, made by fans for fans! Obviously you don't own MLP. it's a pretty pointless thing to write if you ask me...
5670433 Ha! It should be
"Here smell this."
You missed your punctuation oh great grammatically correct one!
5670643
Plenty of things get past editors. Also, I was in a noisy cafeteria and couldn't focus. Quit being mean to the poor 13 year old. 
Oh shaddup!
(Seriously, do you want my help?)
5671140
Thanks for the help. I hope you enjoyed my story. If you can find anymore grammar mistakes I would appreciate the help combing them out. Also, to anyone who wants a revised version, I will be keeping the copy on my fanfiction.net page updated with any changes I make.
5671140 Hehe... I'm not the author.
5672647
sorry. when i reply to you, it says i'm replying to "5672647". I also typed that comment while taking a break in between.