The irony about this is that "Klein" has a specific meaning in German—it means "small".
Well, this was interesting! It's true, her exposure was fun, but I'll admit I'm not all that fond of her boyfriend's role or the one of Klein himself. So, thanks for the warning!
Paul's pathetic cuckolding was fine for a while, but he should get a clue at some point. And Klein, he's taking up too much spotlight. He's not all that interesting, but we get stuck with him again and again. A bit unfortunate since, as you explained, there won't be other characters introduced to share the spotlight with him. A canon male turning out to be a douche like him would work perfectly.
You know, I hope that, even after all this, Shy will still stay with Paul. Makes for one hell of a (as much as that is even still possible) vanilla ending.
7173296 Heh, well, if it's just a story where Klein is subjected to "hilarious" karma, it's probably not for me. I don't need a revenge fic about him or something like that, I enjoy the fetish aspects of this one.
7174095 So, just physical violence as revenge and nothing else? Yup, that sounds like something I'd avoid. Sorry, those stories just aren't my cup of tea.
7174101 I'm sure there are others who will enjoy the catharsis of a pathetic excuse of a man such as Klein getting what he deserves. Such men are a throwback to the dark ages, and deserve punishment.
Man, I'm really looking forward to the rest of this, it's so hard to find good cucking stuff in the pony fandom... and though I'll keep quiet on my suspicions as to why that may be, a certain comment thread in here certainly reinforces the less-than-kind assumptions I've made. Still, all that aside, this is excellent, so hopefully the next entry won't be too far away.
I just stumbled on this series, and I Just gotta say that this fic hits a lot of the right buttons for me, and it'll definitely be one I keep an eye on! That PSA video idea with Twilight sounds fun, though that would probably be after the next Flutter's installment. That being said, I'd love to see an interlude with Rarity, and how a high-class gal like her ended up servicing a low-life stud like Klein, and if there was any follow-up to that other than a quickie cameo.
As for the two spin-off fics involving Facet, some parts of them contradict events in this story, so I don't know if you'd really consider them as "canon" to the main storyline, or kinda their own thing.
Anyway, thanks for reading and enjoying the story! Since the content is so unappealing to most people, it really makes me happy to hear readers say it scratched their itch for exactly this sort of thing. Being able to make something nice for people who's fetishes are underrepresented or whatever (in this case, MLP adultery/misogyny/etc) is exactly why I started writing in the first place.
As for Rarity, I do love her, and she's one of my favourite ponies. I even had plans for a Laden Milkmaidens chapter featuring her originally before the commissioner shot it down. I didn't have any particular plans for her to be included in what is primarily a Fluttershy/Gilda/Twilight story, but who knows~ A fan wanting to write a Celestia scene with me ended up creating a cute little spin-off idea based on that, so it could potentially happen. My main stumbling block is I don't have any really special ideas for her like I did with the other three. Well, insofar as "yet another exploitative photoshoot" can be called a special idea.
And as for Pink Circle: Karmic Due, the REAL problem is they left out Gilda! How dare they do that to my Griffon waifu!
(Also I wanted to say I'm taking the time to read Renewed Vows, Renewed Desires and I am really liking what I'm seeing so far~)
7529663 Thanks for taking the time out to give me a read! Always nice to get some feedback from another writer. I've been pretty lazy with keeping up with my projects, but I've recently fallen back into the writing bug, so I'm hoping to keep busy churning up more smut!
Yeah, I can see the negative response to this in the votes, which perplexes me; if people don't like the fetish content of a story, they don't have to read it. I mean, I don't go out of my way to read stories with content I don't like, just to down-vote them. Cuckolding and rape seem to be a big ones that gets people riled up, I've noticed. Oh well, can't please everyone!
There's so much at play with this series that makes it fun for me to read through, and think of what other debauched happenings might be unfolding around campus thanks to Klein's influence. If you ever do pen a chapter for Rares, I'd rather it come from inspiration rather than obligation, but I think it might be interesting to see how Klein might "swoon" a gal with loftier standards and elegance like her, instead of the usual loose sluts or plucked wallflowers, and then put the stuck-up bitch in her proper place.
I find it kinda hard to think of Karmic Shift being the same "canon" as this for a few reasons: Twilight goes from being a lesbian to having a long-term boyfriend out of the blue, who just so happens to be Klein's protege, the manner of which Fluttershy and Klein first had sex is different than in Pink Circle, and things between Klein and Twilight seem to unfold too fast.
7530000 I try to assume that most people don't down-vote stuff just out of spite; but I do know those kinda people are out there, sometimes in force, to complain about something they didn't even read. Pretty immature way to handle things, not that the voting system really means all that much in Fimfiction anyway.
As for the two spin-off fics involving Facet, some parts of them contradict events in this story, so I don't know if you'd really consider them as "canon" to the main storyline, or kinda their own thing.
I find it kinda hard to think of Karmic Shift being the same "canon" as this for a few reasons: Twilight goes from being a lesbian to having a long-term boyfriend out of the blue, who just so happens to be Klein's protege, the manner of which Fluttershy and Klein first had sex is different than in Pink Circle, and things between Klein and Twilight seem to unfold too fast.
It's not suppossed to be canon. It's more suppossed to be an Alternative Universe spin-off of this story. Something along the lines of, what if Twilight had a boyfriend and what if Klein had decided to go all the way in the photoshoot with Fluttershy?
About things developing too fast between them, the spin-off of Lobo an I assumes that Twilight is Klein's plaything for at least a month or two, so, yeah, maybe we should have mentioned that?
Well, despite all that I still hope you like the spin-off idea.
7531934 That clears it up then, if it's sort of an alternate-version of events, then I don't have to directly compare the two. Thanks for the clarification! Though, didn't Klein already go "all the way" with Fluttershy in the photo-shoot? He mentions fucking her in the Gilda chapters (and how she preferred it bareback), the video sent to her boyfriend seems to be them getting it on with each other, and he refers to her marehood in the 2nd Flutters chapter as "nearly virgin.". The time-frame of events was kinda foggy to me, so mentioning that this was some time after the photo-shoot or how Twilight and Klein had been doing this for awhile might have made that more clear (perhaps a trail of thought in the first chapter from her boyfriend about how she's been spending so much more time "working" at the library in the past few months, and always takes a shower right away when she comes in?).
Why do people follow this asshole? Klein is nether charming nor does he have the presence of someone capable of manipulating others into doing what he wants. Hell I'm surprised he's even alive since I'm sure he's pissed off so many people that one of them had to have taken a shot at him by now!
The irony about this is that "Klein" has a specific meaning in German—it means "small".
Well, this was interesting! It's true, her exposure was fun, but I'll admit I'm not all that fond of her boyfriend's role or the one of Klein himself. So, thanks for the warning!
Paul's pathetic cuckolding was fine for a while, but he should get a clue at some point. And Klein, he's taking up too much spotlight. He's not all that interesting, but we get stuck with him again and again. A bit unfortunate since, as you explained, there won't be other characters introduced to share the spotlight with him. A canon male turning out to be a douche like him would work perfectly.
I wonder if the next fluttershy chapter will be a public Notch on the bedpost..
You know, I hope that, even after all this, Shy will still stay with Paul. Makes for one hell of a (as much as that is even still possible) vanilla ending.
7169620 I've been given permission by the author to do a little spinoff. Klein will get what's coming to him with interest.
7173296
Heh, well, if it's just a story where Klein is subjected to "hilarious" karma, it's probably not for me. I don't need a revenge fic about him or something like that, I enjoy the fetish aspects of this one.
7174067 It's him getting a no holds barred beatdown from Big Mac, my OC, Cheese Sandwich, Spike, Soarin, and Shining Armor.
7174095
So, just physical violence as revenge and nothing else? Yup, that sounds like something I'd avoid. Sorry, those stories just aren't my cup of tea.
7174101 I'm sure there are others who will enjoy the catharsis of a pathetic excuse of a man such as Klein getting what he deserves. Such men are a throwback to the dark ages, and deserve punishment.
7174105
Catharsis is of interest to many. Again, it's just not for me.
7174105 Plz tell me when it is done i will read.
Man, I'm really looking forward to the rest of this, it's so hard to find good cucking stuff in the pony fandom... and though I'll keep quiet on my suspicions as to why that may be, a certain comment thread in here certainly reinforces the less-than-kind assumptions I've made. Still, all that aside, this is excellent, so hopefully the next entry won't be too far away.
7294263
You're such a sweetheart! Next chapter of this is still a ways-off while I work on other pones, but thanks for the very kind words.
7303100 Didn't you notice that that was (among others) the reason I said to not take this story seriously?
As much as I enjoy busty Fluttershy, the part where Paul is being emasculated by Klein was just... just... unpleasant.
I know I should had expected something like this, given the nature of this fic, but this chapter and Paul's humiliation just felt wrong.
But don't mind me, that's just my preferences and all.
7382282
Sorry! I'd really recommend you skipping the next chapter as well, then, since it only gets worse from there on in.
7294263
Thanks so much! That's so sweet of you to say so!
I just stumbled on this series, and I Just gotta say that this fic hits a lot of the right buttons for me, and it'll definitely be one I keep an eye on! That PSA video idea with Twilight sounds fun, though that would probably be after the next Flutter's installment. That being said, I'd love to see an interlude with Rarity, and how a high-class gal like her ended up servicing a low-life stud like Klein, and if there was any follow-up to that other than a quickie cameo.
As for the two spin-off fics involving Facet, some parts of them contradict events in this story, so I don't know if you'd really consider them as "canon" to the main storyline, or kinda their own thing.
7529141
"Low-life" is right, Klein is the worst, haha.
Anyway, thanks for reading and enjoying the story! Since the content is so unappealing to most people, it really makes me happy to hear readers say it scratched their itch for exactly this sort of thing. Being able to make something nice for people who's fetishes are underrepresented or whatever (in this case, MLP adultery/misogyny/etc) is exactly why I started writing in the first place.
As for Rarity, I do love her, and she's one of my favourite ponies. I even had plans for a Laden Milkmaidens chapter featuring her originally before the commissioner shot it down. I didn't have any particular plans for her to be included in what is primarily a Fluttershy/Gilda/Twilight story, but who knows~ A fan wanting to write a Celestia scene with me ended up creating a cute little spin-off idea based on that, so it could potentially happen. My main stumbling block is I don't have any really special ideas for her like I did with the other three. Well, insofar as "yet another exploitative photoshoot" can be called a special idea.
And as for Pink Circle: Karmic Due, the REAL problem is they left out Gilda! How dare they do that to my Griffon waifu!
(Also I wanted to say I'm taking the time to read Renewed Vows, Renewed Desires and I am really liking what I'm seeing so far~)
7529663
Thanks for taking the time out to give me a read! Always nice to get some feedback from another writer. I've been pretty lazy with keeping up with my projects, but I've recently fallen back into the writing bug, so I'm hoping to keep busy churning up more smut!
Yeah, I can see the negative response to this in the votes, which perplexes me; if people don't like the fetish content of a story, they don't have to read it. I mean, I don't go out of my way to read stories with content I don't like, just to down-vote them. Cuckolding and rape seem to be a big ones that gets people riled up, I've noticed. Oh well, can't please everyone!
There's so much at play with this series that makes it fun for me to read through, and think of what other debauched happenings might be unfolding around campus thanks to Klein's influence. If you ever do pen a chapter for Rares, I'd rather it come from inspiration rather than obligation, but I think it might be interesting to see how Klein might "swoon" a gal with loftier standards and elegance like her, instead of the usual loose sluts or plucked wallflowers, and then put the stuck-up bitch in her proper place.
I find it kinda hard to think of Karmic Shift being the same "canon" as this for a few reasons: Twilight goes from being a lesbian to having a long-term boyfriend out of the blue, who just so happens to be Klein's protege, the manner of which Fluttershy and Klein first had sex is different than in Pink Circle, and things between Klein and Twilight seem to unfold too fast.
7529875
"I don't go out of my way to read stories with content I don't like, just to down-vote them."
>implying they read them
7530000
I try to assume that most people don't down-vote stuff just out of spite; but I do know those kinda people are out there, sometimes in force, to complain about something they didn't even read. Pretty immature way to handle things, not that the voting system really means all that much in Fimfiction anyway.
7529141
It's not suppossed to be canon. It's more suppossed to be an Alternative Universe spin-off of this story. Something along the lines of, what if Twilight had a boyfriend and what if Klein had decided to go all the way in the photoshoot with Fluttershy?
About things developing too fast between them, the spin-off of Lobo an I assumes that Twilight is Klein's plaything for at least a month or two, so, yeah, maybe we should have mentioned that?
Well, despite all that I still hope you like the spin-off idea.
7529663
We are currently thinking about the revenge chapters, so it is not too late for us to actually use her!
...Heh, use! Damn, now I want to write a gangbang scene with Gilda!
7531934
That clears it up then, if it's sort of an alternate-version of events, then I don't have to directly compare the two. Thanks for the clarification! Though, didn't Klein already go "all the way" with Fluttershy in the photo-shoot? He mentions fucking her in the Gilda chapters (and how she preferred it bareback), the video sent to her boyfriend seems to be them getting it on with each other, and he refers to her marehood in the 2nd Flutters chapter as "nearly virgin.". The time-frame of events was kinda foggy to me, so mentioning that this was some time after the photo-shoot or how Twilight and Klein had been doing this for awhile might have made that more clear (perhaps a trail of thought in the first chapter from her boyfriend about how she's been spending so much more time "working" at the library in the past few months, and always takes a shower right away when she comes in?).
Just wondering if this story is going to continue
The first chapters were amazing, even the ones with gilda(who im normaly no fan of)
Would be cool
When will you continue this story?
Why do people follow this asshole? Klein is nether charming nor does he have the presence of someone capable of manipulating others into doing what he wants. Hell I'm surprised he's even alive since I'm sure he's pissed off so many people that one of them had to have taken a shot at him by now!