There are still so many things confusing about this whole story. 1,Is Fluttershy even aware that she's openly cheating on her boyfriend? does she realise? but at this point i doubt that their even together. And everytime Klein shows up its like her IQ drops by 80% seriously she acts like a dumb bimbo. 2,And whats up with Gilda? It was told that she doesnt like men yet she's willingly giving this guy a blowjob and after he finishes she even says its "Fucking Gross". So... is she Gay? Straight? Bi? Pan? i dont fucking know. 3,And Twi just seems to fall apart everytime Klein opens his mouth. Like... i dont understand. Was there something i missed in a previous chapter? than again its been a while since i read this but im not gonna plow through the whole thing again, once was enough. Whatever, ill just hold on to them for now and give my final thoughts once its finished.
The sequel isn't anything to do with this story. It's written by another writer with my permission, so I should definitely stress I had no involvement with its writing, I didn't review what he'd written or edit it or anything, I just said he could go nuts and write whatever he wanted.
It's a revenge fic where Klein gets his "karmic due" and comeuppance, hence the title, although it seems to be on hiatus atm.
I'm surprised Klein hasn't ever touched upon the pervasive problem of breast envy. Sure, I get it, he'd rather spend his time touching upon breasts directly, but that still seems like something he would suddenly start talking about, if only to manipulate the girls around him (and not because it's really that much of a problem in the first place, which it isn't).
The moment Twilight said she would make his records "disappear", this screamed "hey, buddy, Klein, would you mind walking into this trap, pretty please?".
Though there are some moments from her perspective, the majority seems to confirm that thought (her innuendos, the tease pics, heck, Klein even outright said how illogical she was being at the start), but... This isn't that kind of story, right?
Huh, consider me intrigued for the next chapter... Which I can fortunately already read, heh.
You continue to have the best setups for this story. Would upvote this story twice if I could.
God, I'm so excited for more. This was a great chapter and it really do a good job of setting things up for the next parts. Hope you update soon!
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Yeah, the setups are the most important part to me! They're as important/more important than the smut content.
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Still a lot to get ready, but I hope so too.
There are still so many things confusing about this whole story.
1,Is Fluttershy even aware that she's openly cheating on her boyfriend? does she realise? but at this point i doubt that their even together. And everytime Klein shows up its like her IQ drops by 80% seriously she acts like a dumb bimbo.
2,And whats up with Gilda? It was told that she doesnt like men yet she's willingly giving this guy a blowjob and after he finishes she even says its "Fucking Gross". So... is she Gay? Straight? Bi? Pan? i dont fucking know.
3,And Twi just seems to fall apart everytime Klein opens his mouth.
Like... i dont understand. Was there something i missed in a previous chapter? than again its been a while since i read this but im not gonna plow through the whole thing again, once was enough.
Whatever, ill just hold on to them for now and give my final thoughts once its finished.
i feel like klein and diann would be secret blood brothers
wait a sec i just noticed theres a sequel to this
and this isnt even finished
am i missing something here?
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The sequel isn't anything to do with this story. It's written by another writer with my permission, so I should definitely stress I had no involvement with its writing, I didn't review what he'd written or edit it or anything, I just said he could go nuts and write whatever he wanted.
It's a revenge fic where Klein gets his "karmic due" and comeuppance, hence the title, although it seems to be on hiatus atm.
I'm surprised Klein hasn't ever touched upon the pervasive problem of breast envy. Sure, I get it, he'd rather spend his time touching upon breasts directly, but that still seems like something he would suddenly start talking about, if only to manipulate the girls around him (and not because it's really that much of a problem in the first place, which it isn't).
gotta know what happens next
Still eagerly waiting for that next chapter!
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Well you're in luck, it's going up next after the upcoming batch of KoTS chapters.
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yay, Evil Cucking and anti-feminism (note just a fetish :P)
Seriously though good writing and I really want to see how far the evil will go
Mmh.
The moment Twilight said she would make his records "disappear", this screamed "hey, buddy, Klein, would you mind walking into this trap, pretty please?".
Though there are some moments from her perspective, the majority seems to confirm that thought (her innuendos, the tease pics, heck, Klein even outright said how illogical she was being at the start), but... This isn't that kind of story, right?
Huh, consider me intrigued for the next chapter... Which I can fortunately already read, heh.