9595073 I think why i enjoy this story so much is that the guys that get cheated on act like 80% of the human MC in HiE spineless and submissive and it irritates me to no end. I understand that fimfic is low T as fuck but I would like some HiEs with the guy acts normal and not like a 9 year old girl.
9595031 Can you give an example of the political hilarious in the story you speak of? Besides the usage of feminist rules being used against feminist of course.
9595838 If you haven't read you have to understand the all the political humor is all very tongue-in-cheek, no serious politics ever come just funny stereotypes. The story pretty much is a asshole super Chad turns stereotypical Tumblr feminists into whores with his sheer Chadness
9595894 I have read the story thus far and taken in account the humor here and there (I have been a victim of radical feminists myself to see the tropes). I was mainly referring to the comment on HIE main characters being... Kinda weak. I just wanted more context on your thinking because I too feel as though those main characters can never survive in the real world with that hubris.
9595994 You know what i mean, it's hard to some up Klein in a few words. Are you every going to do any more storys like Ancient Equine Analysis that's probably one of my favorite clop fics.
9595953 I dont quite understand what you're asking.
9596000 "think why i enjoy this story so much is that the guys that get cheated on act like 80% of the human MC in HiE spineless and submissive and it irritates me to no end. I understand that fimfic is low T as fuck but I would like some HiEs with the guy acts normal and not like a 9 year old girl."
This section where you compare the other HIE Main characters to characters on this story Mr. Tim. As a satire, clop, and now horror fix writer, I want more context one what you mean on what you said. Its for me to be more critical when analyzing characters and to utilize this knowledge in my own works if you don't mind.
9596000 Yeah, I might possibly describe him as a very persistent pervert who happens to stumble into some of the most closeted sluts ever.
As for Ancient Equine Analysis, you're in luck. Someone completely unrelated to the first commissioner approached me to write a sequel recently, so it looks like my intentions to retire from pony-writing this year will be put off a tiny bit longer.
9596025 What I was trying to get across was that most HiE MCs act like barely functioning adults or better yet they act like young children so if you have a story wear the MC is said to be 25 but then starts acting like 12 year old or brings you out of the story.
I'm in love with this story. I'm both happy and frustrated this isn't the final chapter, because I both don't want it to end, and continue to crave more.
This story is politically hilarious. Also this story would cause a gender Studies major to have a fucken aneurysm.
9595031
Very sweet of you to say so!
9595073
I think why i enjoy this story so much is that the guys that get cheated on act like 80% of the human MC in HiE spineless and submissive and it irritates me to no end. I understand that fimfic is low T as fuck but I would like some HiEs with the guy acts normal and not like a 9 year old girl.
Great job, my dude! Can't wait to see where it goes from here!
9595031
Can you give an example of the political hilarious in the story you speak of? Besides the usage of feminist rules being used against feminist of course.
9595838
If you haven't read you have to understand the all the political humor is all very tongue-in-cheek, no serious politics ever come just funny stereotypes. The story pretty much is a asshole super Chad turns stereotypical Tumblr feminists into whores with his sheer Chadness
Always good to see this show up in the update box. Great work as always Frocto.
9595894
I have read the story thus far and taken in account the humor here and there (I have been a victim of radical feminists myself to see the tropes). I was mainly referring to the comment on HIE main characters being... Kinda weak. I just wanted more context on your thinking because I too feel as though those main characters can never survive in the real world with that hubris.
9595246
Thanks very much!
9595947
Glad I could brighten your day!
9595894
I think Klein might be too much of a perv to be a real chad, but I'll take it.
9595994
You know what i mean, it's hard to some up Klein in a few words. Are you every going to do any more storys like Ancient Equine Analysis that's probably one of my favorite clop fics.
9595953
I dont quite understand what you're asking.
9596000
"think why i enjoy this story so much is that the guys that get cheated on act like 80% of the human MC in HiE spineless and submissive and it irritates me to no end. I understand that fimfic is low T as fuck but I would like some HiEs with the guy acts normal and not like a 9 year old girl."
This section where you compare the other HIE Main characters to characters on this story Mr. Tim. As a satire, clop, and now horror fix writer, I want more context one what you mean on what you said. Its for me to be more critical when analyzing characters and to utilize this knowledge in my own works if you don't mind.
9596000
Yeah, I might possibly describe him as a very persistent pervert who happens to stumble into some of the most closeted sluts ever.
As for Ancient Equine Analysis, you're in luck. Someone completely unrelated to the first commissioner approached me to write a sequel recently, so it looks like my intentions to retire from pony-writing this year will be put off a tiny bit longer.
9596039
That's what's up make those mons with horse words. I hope theres more then just anal in the sequel.
9596054
The hint is right there in the title.
9596025
What I was trying to get across was that most HiE MCs act like barely functioning adults or better yet they act like young children so if you have a story wear the MC is said to be 25 but then starts acting like 12 year old or brings you out of the story.
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I'm in love with this story. I'm both happy and frustrated this isn't the final chapter, because I both don't want it to end, and continue to crave more.
This little typo got a chuckle from me
9597085
The last chapter is out this time next month, so just sit tight until then. And thanks so much for the kind words.
Also thankyou for spotting that typo, it's fixed now.
Another excellent and enjoyable chapter.
9604623
Thanks very much! Enjoy the ending.