Wearing down lesbians? I think that may be an actual war crime. The forceful version is used by extremists in other places.
When I read the description I actually wondered why there was such a huge down vote slant. I thought it was all in endowments, which makes for good clop. Now I see this is point for point an incel insanity story. You may as well say you are a disciple of Roosh the Douche and just as creeping incapable of emotions as Marjan "Motherfuer" Siklic.
Wow, at first i waited that he would actualy fuck Fluttershy, but then as i read more, i endet up hoping more and more that Paul would suck Klein off one way or another. A little but disappointing that it didnt happen, but the tension and build up is great. Still hoping that there would be an actual Flutterfucking, but hey^^ cant have everything :P Please continue this story, its great. and speaking of that... YAY NEW CHAPTER
I think he came as reasonably, possibly close to sucking on it as he could! But yes, this has always been a story more teasing concepts than actually presenting them. I really doubt I'll write a scene for it as "overt" as what happened to Gilda again.
And yeah, it was nice to have my Patreon backers vote for this one to be continued, I felt like I had neglected it for too long.
7830243 Well, i think the overtness level of the Gilda chapter, maybe little less, is exactly the right level . It combined a lot of build up and tension and "climaxed" it into a short but "meaningfull" sex act. Dunno, its your story and it has been great so far^^ ill just see what comes in the future.
Progression before year's end, yay! This is something of a strange chapter, since its focused on Paul rather than Klein's perspective, so the language and how it's written is certainly different, given that they're both very different kinds of stallions. The sexual content of this part of the story wasn't quite my thing, but it makes sense given just how alluring of a stud Klein is that even subby stallions fall under his spell. If there's another part of this particular scene in the future, perhaps it might be something like the ending of the first chapter, with perspective shifting between Klein/Fluttershy "modeling" and a humiliated Paul trying to keep tabs on them over the phone (or sneak into Klein's abode) while dodging the jeers of classmates, only getting lewdness in reply, and then barging in on their love-nest in a foolhardy attempt to stop it?
I think I do like the more alluded-to sexual antics in this "universe" rather than the more overt material most of the time; it's good imagination-fuel and leaves a lot of room for expanding later on. Though on the front of Gilda, I wonder if, since she's been dethroned as the stalwart lesbian who can resist any advances of men, if other guys will pick up where Klein left off with her? She'll end up as another puritan-turned-bimbo conquest if she's not careful!
Hey, glad you liked it! After all the whining and complaining I've gotten about this story, it's refreshing to hear an actual (presumed) female's perspective. Super glad the ladies can get into it, too. And your ideas are pretty good! Definitely gets me thinking.
I wouldn't mind discussing possible twists and turns with you further, but like I said to the other commenter, there's no plans to continue this part of the story. It ties things off exactly how I wanted. Klein and Fluttershy are definitely getting up to something, but like you said, it's good "imagination-fuel" for the readers. And I wanna get to Twilight, anyway!
7833805 Twilight does need some more love; it's been awhile since we've heard from her! I imagine Klein may have left quite the impression on her since their last meeting! She's probably been having some trouble keeping focused on leading the Pink Circle organization with his "aftertaste" lingering.
I certainly wouldn't mind offering my own view on potential twists in this fun story! Sadly, I can't speak for a "feminine" viewpoint on this story, but you're not the first person to make that mistake. It seems a lot of folks think I'm a gal just from how I chat through text! Probably because I spent so much time RPing as female characters that it wears on other things; still, I'll take it as a compliment.
I... am seriously questioning Klein and paul's sexual orientation after this. I get this was all a power play by Klein but this crossed into some seriously weird territory. And shame on paul, Like 'turn in your man card cause you don't deserve it' shame. I would rather get my ass kicked than let this happen.
7833805 "there's no plans to continue this part of the story. It ties things off exactly how I wanted"
Must admit that's a bit of a shame as I was hoping for one more chapter where we'd get to see "Get her to do most of the work herself, so by the end he was just popping into a readily presented hole." in some detail just to round it out.
Wearing down lesbians? I think that may be an actual war crime. The forceful version is used by extremists in other places.
When I read the description I actually wondered why there was such a huge down vote slant. I thought it was all in endowments, which makes for good clop. Now I see this is point for point an incel insanity story. You may as well say you are a disciple of Roosh the Douche and just as creeping incapable of emotions as Marjan "Motherfuer" Siklic.
Wow, at first i waited that he would actualy fuck Fluttershy, but then as i read more, i endet up hoping more and more that Paul would suck Klein off one way or another. A little but disappointing that it didnt happen, but the tension and build up is great.
Still hoping that there would be an actual Flutterfucking, but hey^^ cant have everything :P
Please continue this story, its great.
and speaking of that... YAY NEW CHAPTER
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I think he came as reasonably, possibly close to sucking on it as he could! But yes, this has always been a story more teasing concepts than actually presenting them. I really doubt I'll write a scene for it as "overt" as what happened to Gilda again.
And yeah, it was nice to have my Patreon backers vote for this one to be continued, I felt like I had neglected it for too long.
7830243 Well, i think the overtness level of the Gilda chapter, maybe little less, is exactly the right level . It combined a lot of build up and tension and "climaxed" it into a short but "meaningfull" sex act.
Dunno, its your story and it has been great so far^^ ill just see what comes in the future.
Progression before year's end, yay! This is something of a strange chapter, since its focused on Paul rather than Klein's perspective, so the language and how it's written is certainly different, given that they're both very different kinds of stallions. The sexual content of this part of the story wasn't quite my thing, but it makes sense given just how alluring of a stud Klein is that even subby stallions fall under his spell. If there's another part of this particular scene in the future, perhaps it might be something like the ending of the first chapter, with perspective shifting between Klein/Fluttershy "modeling" and a humiliated Paul trying to keep tabs on them over the phone (or sneak into Klein's abode) while dodging the jeers of classmates, only getting lewdness in reply, and then barging in on their love-nest in a foolhardy attempt to stop it?
I think I do like the more alluded-to sexual antics in this "universe" rather than the more overt material most of the time; it's good imagination-fuel and leaves a lot of room for expanding later on. Though on the front of Gilda, I wonder if, since she's been dethroned as the stalwart lesbian who can resist any advances of men, if other guys will pick up where Klein left off with her? She'll end up as another puritan-turned-bimbo conquest if she's not careful!
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Hey, glad you liked it! After all the whining and complaining I've gotten about this story, it's refreshing to hear an actual (presumed) female's perspective. Super glad the ladies can get into it, too. And your ideas are pretty good! Definitely gets me thinking.
I wouldn't mind discussing possible twists and turns with you further, but like I said to the other commenter, there's no plans to continue this part of the story. It ties things off exactly how I wanted. Klein and Fluttershy are definitely getting up to something, but like you said, it's good "imagination-fuel" for the readers. And I wanna get to Twilight, anyway!
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Twilight does need some more love; it's been awhile since we've heard from her! I imagine Klein may have left quite the impression on her since their last meeting! She's probably been having some trouble keeping focused on leading the Pink Circle organization with his "aftertaste" lingering.
I certainly wouldn't mind offering my own view on potential twists in this fun story! Sadly, I can't speak for a "feminine" viewpoint on this story, but you're not the first person to make that mistake. It seems a lot of folks think I'm a gal just from how I chat through text! Probably because I spent so much time RPing as female characters that it wears on other things; still, I'll take it as a compliment.
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Oops! That's embarrassing, and I apologize for the mistake, haha.
Well, still feel free to contact me, maybe we could cook something up.
I... am seriously questioning Klein and paul's sexual orientation after this. I get this was all a power play by Klein but this crossed into some seriously weird territory. And shame on paul, Like 'turn in your man card cause you don't deserve it' shame. I would rather get my ass kicked than let this happen.
5665456 Damn straight.
All build up
No pay off
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"there's no plans to continue this part of the story. It ties things off exactly how I wanted"
Must admit that's a bit of a shame as I was hoping for one more chapter where we'd get to see
"Get her to do most of the work herself, so by the end he was just popping into a readily presented hole."
in some detail just to round it out.