I like this. First-person narration was a pleasant surprise, and Big Mac's characterization is perfect.

Zecora is absolutely correct that there's no substitute for bare feet on grass. Rugs don't come close.

Liked and upvoted

Ooh boy, this shows some promise. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This was fun, and pretty cute as well.
It did strike me as odd that Zecora seemed perplexed and/or surprised that Big Mac was uncomfortable with her nudity. She seemed unusually aware of the cultural differences going through town, and she admitted that even in her own culture it wasn't common for women.

That white space tho.

Alright, you have my attention. Let's see where this goes!

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5679534 I tried to get rid of that, but to no avail. It's just G-docs being stupid. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/dingdingding.png

Hmmm....Do I sense a lil' Zecora X Big Mac...?

Upvoted and favorited!

I like what I see so far, joke definitely intended.

I'm intrigued. I like Zecora, and even though this particular ship is 'eh' to me, she's enough for me to keep reading.

Well this seems promising. I'll track for now just to see where it goes.

Well, admiral biscuit's blurb about you was enough to get me interested, but you've managed to keep that interest. I love cultural exchanges!

I'll be watching this

I spotted a typo.

After getting out of bed, I shuffled towards the window and allowed the golden rays of sunlight warm my face.

You seem to be missing a "to". So it should look like this:

After getting out of bed, I shuffled towards the window and allowed the golden rays of sunlight to warm my face.

Big Mac's reaction was hilarious! I can tell I'll enjoy this

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Great story so far, and I like how you thought up how Zecora's cultural and her way of life consistent of being nude.

Nothing sexier than a naked native girl.

They bite.

No one will get this reference.

6315732 Ventura?

5677786 as loong there is no dogshit among the grass that is.

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Amazing story, well thought plot, and a very interesting history of Zecora's tribe

Hey! just got to finally finish a few chapters of this! I am enjoying it thoroughly.

It's also a surprisingly different and relatable story so far. The short of it, its really good!

p.s sorry about the Jew of the jungle mistake, but based on how fast you posted that reaction image, it must be common.

Zecora's awesomeness more than makes up for the fact she isn't rhyming.

I love this so far and can't wait to see where it goes.