Zecora, a young chieftess in training, yearns for a simpler life. A life free from obligations, duties, and her overbearing father. She finds such a life in Equestria but is about to realize just how different her culture is from theirs.
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Given the derivation of nubile, Zecora is definitely ahead of just about anyone else on that beach.
Really liking the new story image.
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That is Zecora's somewhat archaic way of saying that the women are attractive and fit. I'm not saying that they're all a bunch of underage teenagers. Why does she say this? Well, the resort primarily caters to the rich and famous. Ergo, there are few people at that beach who aren't fit and beautiful. I just thought I'd clarify that.
In any case, I'm glad you like the new cover pic. I thought it was more appropriate.
Good work.
6818298 I honestly don't know if you actually like this story or just enjoy being a sarcastic ass.
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Unless, of course, people are actually attractive, then they should be ridiculed.
Out of curiosity who's she talking to? Lines like these would only make sense if someone were giving some kind of look or response to what she said.
6820820 Yes.
Yeah, you only went out and hunted a bear sized lion. No biggie.
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Methinks he was associating it with Nubian.
6833504 Who knows? roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/party.png
In his original comment he stated: "Zecora is definitely ahead of just about anyone else on that beach" which I took to mean that he was referring to their apparent age. It's probably because the term nubile is used so much in the porn industry nowadays. I.E. it basically describes barely legal teen girls.
But I can tell you right now that it wasn't my intention at all to make the scene into something sexual. The whole idea behind Zecora's statement is that she feels the resort is a bit too exclusive and doesn't project a realistic image of nudism as a lifestyle/belief. She believes it's something everyone should be entitled to enjoy.
Sorry if I got a bit preachy there. I just want people to understand my intentions properly.
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No worries, I never took it as sexual, which is why I assumed he meant nubian. As Zecora is from faux Africa here.
I'm a bit disappointed, to be honest. For the first half of the first chapter, it looked like this story might have avoided the pitfall that almost every story featuring a nudist character runs into, namely abandoning pacing and immersion to spend time preaching about how right nudism is and how backwards everyone else is in comparison.
6889861 You know, I debated about putting Zecora's little spiel about nudism in this chapter. Something in the back of my mind told me that it was probably a bad idea. In the end, I suppose it just ended up sounding a bit too preachy. That being said: It's time to put your money where your mouth is. What would you do about it? I'm curious. Would you just edit that part out in favor of more immersion or just delete it all together?
6890459 Well, I suppose that depends if your primary desire is a clopfic, or a nudist-fic. If the former, yeah, kill it for immersion. Partly because people don't really talk like that without a prepared script.
If the latter, have it be an actual discussion, not just internal monologue and one-sided convos; give both sides valid points, not just the side you want to support.
Guess I have to read the rest of it now to be able to give intelligent feedback on anything further. Well played.
6942943 I honestly don't remember if I ever gave a gender to the Mountain Lion. I can change that easily, if it's not accurate.
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based on phrasing, I think you mean 'uncertain'.
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