Zecora, a young chieftess in training, yearns for a simpler life. A life free from obligations, duties, and her overbearing father. She finds such a life in Equestria but is about to realize just how different her culture is from theirs.
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Hmm, interesting turn of events. Hope they have a bunch of kids!
WOO CUTE LITTLE MOCHA APPLES!!!!
Interesting plot? Check. Finally some good background story of Zecora? Check. Big Mac? Check. Clop, or sex in this case...even if it could be improved? Check. Hot and bothered right now? Double Check. You, fine sir or lady, have gained a very interested follower of this story, i await the next update eagerly
P.D: if you need pointers or inspiration for sex scenes i could send you a few scenarios to help you, just food for your thoughs.
I am thoroughly enjoying the reversed roles accurately portrayed (well, accurate enough) with their own consequences.
Ship all the ZecoraMac, ship it like Fedex!
No, seriously, this is a really sweet story and I highly enjoy every single chapter.
Yeah, big legal problem here. If they make this whole thing official, all of the Apples are going to know within a week. Since the Apples are seeded (pun intended) throughout the land, word will somehow reach Zecora's father. For him, it will not matter if she officially requested asylum, he's coming after his runaway daughter.
I have only one issue, the sex of the cat. Male cats are larger of the two. Not by much but they are still the larger sex... Other than that no real issue
One word awesome
The quotes I'm commenting on are a couple of the inappropriate parts, so I'll have them, and my comment [/spoilered] just in case...
Knowing Zecora, I think it would fit better if she said pre-ejaculate instead, because that's the proper name for it...
knife in his hand