After the passing of both Celestia and Luna, Twilight is left to rule Equestria. For a hundred years she was known as a benevolent and compassionate ruler; bringing peace, prosperity, and unity to her ponies. But that all changed when the great Dragon War reached the shores of Equestria. Her decisions in that war had forever changed her. One day she gets a message from Spike asking for her to meet him at his new home deep in the Archback mountains of the Wildlands. The war ended a long time ago but some wounds still havn’t healed. Spike, at the end of his rope pleads for Twilight to kill him. But can she do it?
Cover art by 2snacks.
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Is this a reupload
This is such a good/sad story.
You got my like/favorite. You should write a sequel to it. I want to see what happens next.
oh my.. So sad yet beautiful.
you have gained my respect as a fellow author and my like/favorite/follow.
I hope you consider writing a sequel.
And the omelets names were Larry, Curly and Moe. . . Nuck nuck nuck.
The feels.
5571925 Kind of. The first time I wrote "Forever in your heart" I really rushed it and left a lot of holes in the story. I was then told by another reviewer that I had a lot to fix in the story. I kept that to heart and made it a point to revise this story after I'd started writing some other stories to see if they would do well. Turns out not many people liked the other stories so i decided to come back to the one story that did work and nearly rewrote 2,000 extra words into it until I felt i had fixed the problem. You be the judge and let me know how i did.
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Now that would be a twist!
5571925 Kind of. The first time I wrote "Forever in your heart" I really rushed it and left a lot of holes in the story. I was then told by another reviewer that I had a lot to fix in the story. I kept that to heart and made it a point to revise this story after I'd started writing some other stories to see if they would do well. Turns out not many people liked the other stories so i decided to come back to the one story that did work and nearly rewrote 2,000 extra words into it until I felt i had fixed the problem. You be the judge and let me know how i did.
5572706 Thanks so much! Your respect means a lot to me, I wont forget that!
5572542 Hey, thanks for your comment Brony1314! I'm planning on writing a sequel and prequel story at some point. However, I'm also pretty preoccupied with the military so finding time to write is a bit hard at times. I will get to a sequel eventually, /i just have to find time...
5573120 No problem take as much time as you need.
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DIS SHIT'S GOOD SON
seriously I'm impressed, I would definately read a sequel or prequel to this.
9 likes in 1 day is nothing to sneeze at
5573095 OK cool good story.
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You are so very welcome
I have never seen a Spike/Twilight story that caught my intrest such as this. So I should be thanking you. Not the other way around.
5574714 Well thanks, I really appreciate your comment! I'm definitely going to start working on a prequel as soon as I find some extra time on my hooves. And thanks for adding my story to your favorites!
Not bad. When he was asking for death and describing that he wasn't truly alive i began to think of a hollow in DarkSouls and boy did that hurt. My feels man. My feels. 10/10
F I M would read again.