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De Writer


After a long dry spell, De Writer has sort of returned. I am now writing again. Watch this space for more new tales and more chapters of the latest

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Coalsmoke, a lovely blank flanked mare, witnesses an attempted assault on Grumpy and that leads to revealing her troubles to him.
Since Grumpy's Non Equine magical practice thrives on the discord between ponies, he agrees to help her.
The troubles and the contract change when she becomes the victim of violent abuse.
As a result of the consequences of the last contract, Coalsmoke earns an unusual cutie mark and embarks on a new carreer.

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Comments ( 2 )

I enjoyed this, especially towards the end. You get up vote because it's Grumpy Goat.
However, you seriously need an editor. The dialog was confusingly placed, the beginning was too fast, and the whole thing felt rushed. Please buy yourself an editor. I really enjoy these tales, but the bad writing is hurting them.

Grumpy is EPIC!~:heart:

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