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De Writer


After a long dry spell, De Writer has sort of returned. I am now writing again. Watch this space for more new tales and more chapters of the latest

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Canbe sets out to gawk at the assorted pranks that Nightmare Night pranksters have done.
When he is passing the cemetery, he finds that an ancient part of it has been vandalized. Going to assist in fixing the vandalism, he finds more than he expected!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Awesome story! I really like the ending, however the speech is a bit hard to follow and confusing. Overall, this is a great read! :twilightsmile:

Thanks for the like.
About the speech issue. I have heard that several times before. I was trained to write using the old New York Times Style Book.
Perhaps this will simplify it for you. Quotation Marks enclose what a single character says like so. "Speech" If the character needs several paragraphs to say their part it will be done like so:
"Paragraph 1
"Paragraph 2 etc." Repeated as often as needed to reach the end of their speech. The final quotation mark goes at the end of the last paragraph. The previous ones get a starting Quotation mark but no close.
I hope that this clears up the speech issue.

That was a fun little story. The dialogue towards the end was a little... purplish, for lack of a better word, but still a fun read.

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