Twilight is called to Celestia's court in order to investigate a strange magic anomaly
Applejack goes through various stage of sadness in mourning of a lost friend
An alicorn makes what he thought would be his final defiance towards an old enemy
Friendships are tried, feelings are strained, and limits are pushed. But in the end hope will make its last stand against the coming darkness
- side note
this is a sequel to my first fan fic: A Watchful Eye, you don't have to read it but I would suggest it so you understand the story a little better.
-second side note
second story Whoop!
Chapters (5)
I'M BACK!!!
Now let's see what the fuss is about
The chapters are a little bit short don't you think?
Conveniently enough ,dear friend, the next chapter is much longer than any of the last ones. I'm right about to post it actually, I just have to do one final read over for mistakes.
Cheers
-AAB
Sorry for the wait guys I hope the extended length is enough to satiate your apparent hunger for the this story.
Let the reading and constructive criticism begin... NOW!
If I made some error somewhere let me know and i'll fix it
-AAB
OH! and send me a PM if you have a question... or comment.
-AAB
Long chapter! YAY
But I love that he just threw Twilight right into the air, but thanks to a clouud, she took no damage!
I believe he was aiming for it... At least I hope so anyway.
-AAB
Hey guys! Leave me some criticism, alright? I need to know If I messed up on something.
Enjoy the new chapter!
Me skimming throe Fimfiction: Another cupcake follow up, another mld followup, GOD NOTHING S GOOD HERE!!
. ANOTHER cupcake follow up, Charlies garden (
) Follow up, another chapter of the new beginning, anoth... WAIT WHAT??? 
Now to the criticism: You missed some commas, one or two grammatical errors but over all: Nothing to care about!
Oh, great to see that your back! Here have some YHEA!
Ok, nice chapter (as always). Nothing I can criticize about grammar, good reactions from characters (I believe Fluttershy's reaction is spot on). A little bit short if anything but otherwise...
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If Not bad=assume!
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Thanks! I'm trying to make sure I get the reactions right and all that stuff, So at least I got Fluttershy right (so far). I'll make sure the next chapter is nice and long, which shouldn't be hard because I've had a very long time to think on it.
Constructive criticism is a wonderful thing and I like it very much!
-AAB