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I like the character of Angel. Mostly because she reminds of me of myself: A autistic...pony, who has a fascination for certain things, and doesn't pick up social ques very well.
"he grasped me by my barding with his free paw"
She's not wearing barding, though.
"As Blast and Burst both snickered at Apple Core’s “Could somepony explain to me who are Bloodtalon Talons and why is Apple Core making such a commotion about it?”"
Is something missing there?
And alas, the chapter ends. Another good one, though!
"Thank you for reading this story, the thought of my scribbles and bizzare imagination entertaining people is one of the best things ever!^^"
You're quite welcome; thanks for writing. :)
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Yes she is, she mentions putting it back on as she gets ready, shortly before Apple Core comes in.
Oh, crap, right, thanks, dunno how this happened.
^^
Aww, thanks^^
8154760 Yeah, I thought you might ;p
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Ah, yes, sorry, missed that! I just remembered the much more extensive talk about not wearing something heavier. Thanks for the correction. :)
Eh, these sorts of things do.
:)
You're welcome!
The wait was totally worth it.
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Thought the same thing for the same reason, why this story has become one of my new favorites. The character's well written and portrays the personality in an entertaining way, 'Can I perform exploratory surgery on you?!'
I like the long chapters too, no reason to apologize for writing too much, it's more to read! Eagerly anticipate the next chapter and seeing what awaits in the Stable, keep it up!
I didn't think you'd introduce griffins this early, but I'm so happy you did!
Oh yeah that is the stuff
At first the story was a bit to straight forward, like the recap of a fallout playthrought, but since the second chapter you got me hooked up. This story deserves to be called a FEq story, you used well al the typical i ingredients and added your own :) kudos!
now i am eager to read more from you
And now I'm caught up. Dang.
I gotta say, I'm really liking where this is going!
Great work as always, dearest
I only just now thought. Fluttershy is alive, how is the statuette talking to Angel?
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In The original Fallout Equestria, it is said that Rarity split her soul into 43 identical pieces, distributing 42 of them into sets of Mane Six statuettes and leaving 1 for herself. Then she "copied" the souls of her friends onto the pieces of her soul so that they would emulate the elements of harmony. Doctor Angel got a hold of one of the Fluttershy ones and the piece of soul stuck inside acts like a miniature Fluttershy, basically.
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i remember she dabbled, but i didn't realise she went that far!
I do too, because I get thenough feeling that the watcher on the wall has had his sights on you for some time.
I feel Angel really moved up in character development in this chapyer. She learned to empathize more, and learned a little about people in general.
However...I could almost hear slow, tension rising music in the background as she decided to pull that morality test. It has to be the fist truly serious thing I've seen her do yet.
If you look around on this site on my comments and such, (examples being my blog posts and how I more or less went full dictator and forbid all talk of PH outside a single thread in one of the FoE groups) am I not at all a fan of PH, and normally do I bitch and moan more about the story than I am right now. Again, see that I am stifling my complaints about PH to a minimum as the (weirdest and) highest praise that I can give your story.
In a lot of other stories where the chapters suddenly begin to double in length do I often find a lot of bloat, and while it would have been nice to find a few more natural breaks in the story, its hard to get anything done when you ain't at a natural breakpoint after all, would I say that it is clear why the chapters have grown to the size that they have since the meat in the chapters have more than doubled in size from the earlier chapters as well. So yea, thumps up and don't mind the length too much.
PS: Been ages since I have read so much in a span of 24 hours, 76K words, about the length of the first Harry Potter book. So once more, thanks for the awesome story, and here to another 76K words!
Nitpicks:
Did I ever tell you that I am a professional pre-reader? So yea don't feel bad about missing these small things. Compared to most stories in here are you one of those with fewest nitpicks to word ratio.
"All of them were clad in some ragged leather barding and carried various weapons," Forgot a space after the comma
"he added as he took some bulled from one dead raider and the gun that laid beside him." Bullets
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Thanks for refraining from complaining about PH too much ;p ^^
Sure, you all don't mind the lenght of the chapters because you don't have to write them Still, thanks^^
Happy to hear that my story entertained you to such extent
Pretty sure about the only reason that there aren't as many things to nitpick about grammar is because I have so many people looking over the chapters
Thanks for pointing those out^^
This story has been sitting in my "read it later" shelf for quite some time. Glad I finally came around to it. Really enjoying it so far.
I would point out a few spelling mistakes and a couple instances where you used one word and probably meant another, but for some reason, the "paste" function on my phone isn't working. But they are few and far enough between them that they aren't distracting.
so.. bassically ur Polish.. yeah?.. why does it not suprise me?
I have officially "just one more chapter"'d myself to 2 am.... my alarm goes off in 4 hrs Some spelling and grammar aside great story so far. I'll be coming back in the morning!