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I'm really enjoying this story so far. It's great to have a story following a more morally grey character than the usual overly good protagonist. Keep it up.
In order: ruptured and emanated
not 100% sure, but i think that is an error
It's back! It's back, people! IT'S BACK! *distant shrieking*
Good to see this didn't die :D keep it up loving Angel as always.
Another excellent chapter, and thank you for writing. :)
oh is this a fallout 2 reference?
man awesome chapter, loved it :)
Are you sure Angel isn't a bard, because that was a hell of a chain of speech check successes! I wish that you could actually pull off this level of Charisma hijinks in Fallout, that would make it so much more fun.
Oh wow I did not expect that, t'was hilarious.
Wow. Suddenly, it rendered me under the table in laughs.
Anyway, great work as always.
Another chapter! Angel has some serious steel in her nerves. The rescue and encounters did feel a tad cliche, however I can understand their purpose. Had Angel simply locked up all of the Raiders it would of been too easy. I imagine this isn't the last we will see of the Enclave either. I also did see a grammatical mistake right here.
I'm not an English major, but I think its supposed to be "I would stutter and have trouble looking them in the eyes." I can't say I'm sure because I know troubles is a word, but it sounded awkward to me.
Keep up the great work!
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Thanks, glad that you're enjoying it^^
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Ah yes, thanks
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Back and gone Although I promised that I would write two more chapters in a row after this one, writing had been tough as of late, got only 3k words so far of chapter 11 ready.
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Considering Angel's opinion regarding the possibility of her own death, it would be really dick-ish of me if I would let the story die, wouldn't it?
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Aww, thanks, and you're welcome^^
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Well, Fallout 2 is my favorite game of the series
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She did take a Party Time Mint-al to pull this off Also, pretty sure there are a few situations where you can steer conversations through several speech checks, though maybe not to such degree.
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Glad to positively surprise you^^
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Thanks, will do
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That was pretty much the purpose of that line
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Yeah, I thought it would be too easy, although honestly having Angel lock them up wasn't my original idea for this chapter but trust me, it's better. As for encounters, well... yeah, cliche Dunno if we see the Enclave again, but the fact that I hate to think up names and went out of my way to name two of them here would probably point to that ;p
Hm, not sure about the troubles/trouble, both seem right to me
Thanks, will do^^
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I swear she has a weighted d20 though XD
Wow... This story is good. It took me 3 days to read this story btw. And man... Angel's gathering quite a eclectic group of friends isn't she? Since this timeline is parallel to Littlepip's, will we ever hear a mention of her somewhere in the story? And if this is an AU (considering you have paired up Ditzy Doo with Angel [which I dig-- but poor Lionheart]), will you even have them meet up somewhere? Or with Blackjack? Anyway, don't worry about answering my questions. I just wanted to let you know I'm looking forward to reading how you'll unravel the story soon.
Love this story so much! Doc Angel’s view on people is scarily close to mine. Is that bad? Keep up the good work.
OH MY GOD! UPDATES!
I continue to adore this story, happy coincidences and minor shenanigans aside. Once Angel's plan was revealed, I KNEW for certain something was going to go wrong (It's FO:E, after all, plans never go according to plans), but I didn't expect such a spectacular series of happenings. Angel is going to have one helluva conversation with Watcher later, which I'm dearly looking forward to.
Also, I get the feeling there's much more to Angel dying than we're going to see anytime soon. She's too confidant.
In any case, loving this, still.
You could say this story has... INFINITE POTENTIAL
Well done so far, Borsuq! I'm really enjoying your story, even with the minor grammar issues. I really love the fact that Angel is not your usual guns blazing Stable Dweller. Angel is a really awesome character that I empathize with; I wish I had her charismatic way with words though.
I'm super in love with this story!
Please, PLEASE keep at it and finish it!
It's so on point for what it's supposed to be. An albino doctor?! FREAKING AWESOME PREMISE.
And her back story is bomb!
Ahh, memories
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Heh, thanks. And yeah, I'm not exempt from falling for the cunning stealth of typos either. :)
So hooded figure... Reference to Fo2 or? Please tell me that it is a reference to the old games! I want to see Angel get chess advice from a talking plant!
Middle finger, diffidently middle finger! Not that practical, but hey he uses a sword, style before anything!
Its a sad sad thing that I have run out of story, but damn did I laugh, honest laughing, not even a little giggle, but a full blown laugh, at multiple points in this chapter. Normally can most other stories only make me lift the corners of my mouth in a smirk, so bravo! If I hadn't already taken my hat off for you would I have done it now.
Nitpicks:
"you mean that by speaking seductively one would make them believe I am think that I am sexually interested in them, and therefore they would" Delete
" (or several bad-aimed)" badly
"As soon as my moved my hoof," I
"I immediately run for the door." ran
"I exclaimed before snapping out of my shock and running for my life" either ad "began" or change to "ran"
"Now that I my lungs and throat weren’t being crushed and I could pay attention to my surroundings," delete
"His captain held her under her gaze a moment longer before speaking," him
"the ghoul pony flew gracefully through the air while dragging wagon large enough to easily contains several ponies" Missing an a
" the pegasi had came to a decision of what to do." come
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Yeah, I didn't play too many RPGs and such, so the joke is a tiny bit lost on me ;p
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Glad you're enjoying the story despite the grammar (which I am working on)^^ And yeah, sleeping in the vicinity of Angel posesses certain risk ;p
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Actually, Infinite Potential begins about a year before Littlepip leaves her Stable. Regardless of that, as much as I would like to have Angel interact with her or Blackjack (my most favorite pony ever) or some other heroes of FoE side stories, I am bound by the canonity of those stories, finding a time when she could meet them would be... difficult. Even considering that in the epilogue of FoE it turned out that the entire story was being read from a book, and in PH's that it was story told around the campfire, which means that neither is necesserily a 100% true potrayel of what had happened...
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Probably ;p Still, happy that you enjoy this story^^
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Yeah, spectacular series of happenings is quite an apt description. On that note, only about a month ago I had realized that this chapter should have been called "Random Encounters" In any case, glad that you're enjoying the story^^
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;p
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As much as I enjoy the praise for how Angel isn't a typical "guns blazing" character, the main reason behind that is... that I suck when it comes to writing shooting scenes, so I figured it would be better to come up with character like her I'm happy that everybody loves it though^^
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Glad that you enjoy this story^^ And don't worry, nothing short of my untimely death will prevent me from finishing it^^
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Was wondering if somebody will make a comment like this! Fun fact, I was originally planning to name a diamond dog in another story of mine Rexio, but even though it's been years, I still hadn't managed to get to the point when I introduced this character :/ Might still use it though, I mean, if Steven King can keep using the same tropes over and over again in his books and get rich from them, then certainly I can use the same name for characters and get nothing from it, right? ;p
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Yep, that's a reference to Fo2, that's my favorite game from the series^^
Mmmm, it's more of a "tradition" thing rather than style
Well, looking over all my stories so far, comedy seems to be my forte Glad that you enjoyed it^^
Thanks for pointing those out^^
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Allow me to clarify the "weighted d20" bit.
In DnD and Pathfinder, the 20 sided dice (called an icosagon or 20-gon in geometry) is used as the deciding factor of "Did I manage to do the thing?"
1 being considered critical failure
20 being considered critical success
I always love derpy in the fallout universe. Her and Homage are the best side characters
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d100, it's Fallout after all (d100 is a pair of distinct decahedron dices if some modern d20 wonder, it was original basis for Fallout pen&paper game)
10/10 chapter, i was laughing my ass off when the enclave showed up. Are you sure she is luck 4?
Found a typo where you wrote "looked" instead of "Locked" towards the middle when the raiders were trapped.
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Well they didn't exactly help her, rather the opposite, so I don't think Luck matters here. The whole chapter was basically one random encounter after another. And yeah, I should have named the chapter "Random Encounters" or something, but unfortunately I hadn't realized that until like a month after I already published the chapter Yeah, years later I am still annoyed with myself enough to remember that!
ah, thanks^^
Glad that you enjoyed the chapter^^
This was a freaking amazing chapter.