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White fur, white hair, red eyes, doctor... What a coincidence, I was actually trying to create a Fo:E with a protagonist like that a long time ago. Though, I gave up on it, cancelled the idea of making it a Fo:E, and haven't even touched it since.
Also, you forgot the 's' in
Just thought you might wanna know.
Oh god why
Oh yeah that hits the spot. Awesome chapter, i am glad you didnt make it shorter xD I am eager to see what happen in the next episode. Will they kiss? Pikieghost will make a party in her head?
"a massive steel door with the number eleven written on them"
"on it"?
"catching the ponies responsible.."
"." or "..."?
"and while the overly layout seems a bit different"
"the overall layout"?
"tilting my head to as I noticed that"
What is the "to" doing there?
...Oh come on! You end on a cliffhanger like that?
(Still enjoying this story, though. :))
Man, I haven't seen a fanfic on here have so many direct corililations to current Americas political climate in a LONG time.
Young adults protesting and making a mess.
Corruption of government officials. Government officials being incapable of doing their jobs.
Religion and differing opinions causing large conflicts.
This chapter was GREAT
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That's pretty shameless
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Hm, I remember two years ago somebody made a comment regarding Angel that apparently a LOT of FoE protagonists share this look, at least the white coat. I honestly know of only two others who look similar, though, with one actually being an albino as well.
Ah, thanks for pointing it out^^
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Might consider it, assuming Jack survives the cliffhanger ;p
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The ending or the chapter overall? Cause I expected a few more comments on how I presented democracy here... most of them being negative, actually...
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Glad you enjoyed it^^ I still prefer if I could have gotten it shorter... takes longer to write those chapters (began working on it by the end of July) and it's a pain to transfer here, but oh well.
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Thanks^^
Duh, it's fun to end like that Though admittedly, I wish I could get the next chapter done much sooner with an ending like this. But other stories, work, so on and so on...
(Happy to hear that^^)
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Funny, I didn't base this chapter on American political climate. Guess stuff's like that is the same everywhere, heh? Still, glad that you enjoyed the chapter.
Oh, and a side note, I do think that I deserve a reward for not having ANYPONY say: "We'll make Stable 11 great AGAIN!" ;p I was tempted a bit, but considered this too easy of a joke.
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Meh, seen shameless-er ;p
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Daym
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"Thanks^^"
You're welcome!
"Duh, it's fun to end like that"
Oh, sure, fun for the author! :D
"Though admittedly, I wish I could get the next chapter done much sooner with an ending like this. But other stories, work, so on and so on..."
Aye, sorry about that.
"(Happy to hear that^^)"
(:))
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I don't know much about politics in other places in the world. That is the only reason I I specifically stated American politics. I also agree that a "Make X great again" joke would have been a bit to obvious.
The reason this chapter will re-read by me is how well you placed current events into a stable. I cannot think of many other ways you could write about these topics without inciting a political argument in the comments.
I restate my opinion towards this chapter. It is GLORIOUS.
Caution speculation and spoilers read at discretion
That Angel has already made several comments about not fearing death, insinuate that she is immortal along with the fact that she can see and hold languid conversations with the figurines that are, in essence, "soul jars" of Rarity gives me to suppose that she did something with her soul to be immortal, or simply in one of her experiments discovered how to autoregenerate herself from death, this I hold for her need to never use too much magic to get exhausted and that she must haved proved this theory in herself causing side effects in her soul
Precaución especulación y spoilers leer a discreción
Que Angel ya haya echo varios comentarios sobre no temerle a la muerte, insinuar que es inmortal junto con el echo que ella puede ver y sostener conversaciones lánguidas con las figurillas que son, en esencia "alma jarros" de Rarity me da a suponer que ella hizo algo con su alma para ser inmortal, o simplemente en uno de sus experimentos descubrió como autoregenerarse desde la muerte, esto lo sostengo por su necesidad de nunca usar demasiada magia para quedar exhausta y que probo esta teoría en si misma causando efectos colaterales en su alma
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Oh god why in response to the betrayal.
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You know there's a spoiler tag, right?
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Yes but i finde that the spoiler system is annoying in cellphones, especially in Long texts, so I opted just to give a warning at the beginning
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Android phones can tap to show and Apple phones can copy and paste to read...
It's bigger on the inside! -companion quotes.
There are those nebulous, peculiar quotes again...I wonder if it has to do with the ouroboros? After all, she still hasn't explained the how's as to how she got it...
Oh my. These must have been Pinkie's predecessors!
Well I enjoyed this so far, I hope to see more chapters in the future!
Welp... Never saw that twist coming!
Nitpicks:
"Entry #22 Entry #23" There are a double linebreak before each of these entries, which makes the story look funny on my end.
" the leaned even closer," then
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What a twist! ;p
Thanks^^
Mmm, I'm confused, Jack said it was Equestria who started the war while I remember the zebras being the one who started the whole thing and they were the aggressive one. I'm wrong or is it just what Jack believe?
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Well, technically, Equestria started the war. If I remember correctly, the zebras had withhold transport of coal to Equestria due to some political crisis, so Equestria eventually took the transport by force, and this slowly escalated into the war. However, what Jack ment was more along the lines of "ponies and zebras had started the war" kind of thinking
My thoughts exactly