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Excellent new Chatter I give it a 10 of 20.
And if yor interested I have some ideas for fanfics you mite like to write
Well...everything definitely just went sideways and not in a good way. I was honestly not expecting this to happen. I’m now wondering if this injury can be fixed.
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Only time will tell, my friend.
OOF
Well...this is gonna put a hamper on my original plans for the Gmod Ponies model pack of mine...
oh yeah! that is the stuff. Thanks for a new chapter it has been a while without reading some of the good stuff.
Quite a rolecoaster of a chapter. No plan comes to a 100%.
Watcher reaction is quite ironic. Her mercy for her test subjects came to bite her very fast. The cliffhanger is also more intense that the last one. But the level up note at the end kind of make it understand that she didnt lose her magic. Maybe she will only be able to use lightning strike now?
"and controlled by the springs that connected"
"and controlled by the strings that connected"?
"repeat, only to froze. She turned"
"repeat, only to freeze. She turned"?
"probably drown by the motion she had made"
"probably drawn by the motion she had made"?
"and finally lounging at me"
"and finally lunging at me"?
"I finally rose my head and"
"I finally raised my head and"?
"S.T.A.T.S." (multiple instances)
"S.A.T.S."?
(Also, I appear to have missed that in the previous chapter, sorry.
Huh, and the one before. Sorry there, too.
(Also, I didn't search back to the beginning of the story, so there might be more elsewhere. There are some correct (Unless you're changing it deliberately?) ones in Chapter 14, at least, though.))
"began to darken as I remembered the conversation had made"
"began to darken as remembering the conversation had made"?
"covered my ears and closed my eyes shot."
"covered my ears and closed my eyes shut."?
"So you lied to me and sent me out fully expecting to be murdered by an angry mob?"
"So you lied to me and sent me out fully expecting me to be murdered by an angry mob?"?
"thanks to those talisman,” Aite countered"
"thanks to those talismans,” Aite countered"?
"the raider mare was laying on her back"
"the raider mare was lying on her back"?
"behind the door they closed, seemingly on their own. Aite appeared beside them, pulling"
"behind the door it closed, seemingly on its own. Aite appeared beside it, pulling"?
"bat pony, who’s eyebrows rose"
"bat pony, whose eyebrows rose"?
"It’s view was partially obscured"
"Its view was partially obscured"?
"This sprite-bot was flying near Appleloosa when I hacked into it, moments before that big explosion in town."
Hmm. Interesting; that sounds like some very convenient timing. I suspect there may be something Spike's not mentioning.
"conversation. Raising to my hooves, I followed"
"conversation. Rising to my hooves, I followed"?
"finally tried again, “I-”
Music again flew"
Extra line break?
...Argh. That is a VERY NASTY CLIFFHANGER, you know!
Argh.
Now I have to wait for the next chapter! :D
Ow...
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10 out of- what, why? I don't- wha?
Sorry, I don't plan to start any new fanfics anytime soon, I have enough trouble as it is writing three completely different fanfics already. Heck, when I started to tell one of my editors (TimePrincess, who replied you earlier) about one story idea I had, she immediately replied "Dude, no, you've got too many stories already" before I even finished xD
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Again, this was supposed to come out at the end of 2020, felt appropriate
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By "time will tell" you mean in 50 years when I finally wrap up my stories and will have the free time to start another one?
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Nicely said
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Ups... sorry?
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Glad that you enjoyed the chapter
Well it was established in the original Fo:E that in this universe unicorns' horns can be healed, unlike in the show, so there's that possiblity
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... FUUUUUUUUU*******************************!!!
In all seriousness, for the life of me, I honestly thought that it's supposed to be S.T.A.T.S., as it is Stable-Tec Arcane Targering Spell, didn't realize that the hyphen made the "T" not be in the abbreviation Thanks for pointing this out, I will go over the previous chapters now.
And thanks for pointing out all of the other things^^
'
This is something that will probably be touched upon later, but considering their conversation in this chapter it might be a while before Watcher appears again
Yeah, it was really hard to not comment somehow about it in reply to your comment to the previous chapter 😈
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I enjoy it for sure. This story is why I keep checking my inbox here regularly
About the horn, sure! other canons cover that, but your story is so matured now that I consider it separately to the others for its own merits
Do you still updating other two stories?
I can see why you wanted it to come out at the end of 2020. Coincidentally, this chapter fits the start of my 2021 all too well.
Anyways, nice work on this chapter! I had to force myself to put it down and take a break or two.
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Sorry! :D
You were getting it right before, it looked like, if that helps?
(And S.T.A.T.S. could make sense, I think... it's just not what the official abbreviation is (and is a little longer).)
And you're welcome. :)
No, really, he's not eager to talk to her again soon? They parted on such good terms! :D
But yeah, curious as I am, understandable that we might not find out for a while if at all.
:)
Though, I'm curious: any particular reason from my comment there, or just generally knowing this was coming up?
Amazing new chapter! Can't believe I missed it earlier, seems like a lot of writers I follow decided to release their stories last Friday xD
That cliffhanger is cruel. Very cruel. I love it.
One of the "Watcher" says "Wachter" instead btw.
Ouch. The perk implies she'll be able to keep casting magic, at least. If she doesn't retain her anesthesia spell, or at least some ability to heal, she's gone from useful to near total uselessness though. Guess we'll see.
And that was awfully judgemental of Watcher. Did he learn nothing about casting judgement without full information from Twilight and Zecora?
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Lol just make them a proof reader already dude
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Well, no promises (I don't know what sort of system your editing team has, for one thing), but I'd be open to discussing the matter further, at least.
This is so far my Favorite fallout equestria story for the simple reason that I love Mad scientists or doctors. Keep up the amazing work!
I hope you have a good week!
And yet it stops again on a damn CLIFFHANGER AGHADSHIIII
Great chapter! Damn, didn't expect that ending.
Omg, you can't just leave us with that kind of cliffhanger!! My favorite albino unicorn just got crippled!
It's 3:27 AM and now I can't sleep, thinking about all the possibilities for the next chapter. Got an eta?
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Sorry, I don't expect to start working on the next chapter until May, let alone when it will be finished
Excellent chapter. Can’t wait for the next one.
After a long time off Fallout: Equestria I am glad to see that one of my favorites stories is still going. I will start for the beginning but I can't wait to read the new chapters. Thank you very much for the story you are writing. Your dedication is really honorable.
I cant thank you enough for making this story and keeping it going, it is one of those things that still give me positive emotions in my crippling depression. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
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What an eventful chapter. And what an ending!