Mr Peculiar
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Kinda noticed my paragraphs are looking like walls, and it'll be different next chapter, I promise.
Well I'll look at this later and give my opinion. I'm always a fan of Vinal X Octavia.
So far pretty good.
good story keep it up
Oh god, it was so hard to press the submit putton last night, I almost didn't do it.
Too much switching back and forth... and it skipped from getting coffee to the club... unless I missed something, it didn't say it skipped.
I only write from a notebook to my iPod so there is most likely going to be multiple errors, I will take a look and hopefully fix. :) thank you for pointing this out!
It went from Octavia figuring out she had a free schedule, coming back from recital, then deciding to go to the 'fancy shmancy restaurant' so the only big skip I saw was the recital skip.
hhmmm. this might become a trap
nice
ITS A TRAP! Lol
wow a clueless Octavia ... I approve
I implore you to write more.
Everyone waiting for a part 4, sorry for being extremely late, but I at least wanted to comment to not leave everyone hanging: I have been, for a long time, in a very bad financial state and I have recently dropped my internet, phone, and cable services so that I may keep the place that I live at. At this moment I am using someone else's WiFi (Not consensually.) and I do not want to use there internet because it makes me feel extremely bad .. so there will not be a part 4 anytime soon, I do not even know if I will ever finish the story. Sorry for letting everyone's hopes down.
Sex?