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Excellent chapter! But it would probably easier on the reader if you split it in 4 or 5 chapters. 75,000 words are rather discouraging for most people.
7614213 True that.
Christ almighty 75,000 words man? That's... a lot to go through for a single chapter man.
But wow it was a good one man, nicely done dude, nicely done!
Whew.... nice.
7617704 man, you are a treat
My god! I have finally caught up with all those over 50k words long chapters........Especially this one with over 70k.
Holy shit man, 70k words in a chapter, you're crazy! But that's good, I really like crazy.
7618526 Thank you, thank you!
7614170 Thank you, it definitely was a long one! I never intend these chapters to be super long but it just sort of happens as I continue to write. If I split up each of these longer chapters that run 40k+ words into 4 or 5 sub-chapters (even just splitting them in half) you're looking at 12 chapters rather than 6 and with what I still have planned I'm not too keen on finishing the story with a chapter list you literally have to scroll your mouse wheel through. Chapter 14 was split into three for two simple reasons: first, 106k words+22k for part 3 so far would make even MY eyes melt, especially when I have to proofread and edit. Bleh! Second, splitting it into 3 parts easily distinguishes it between who/what the chapter focuses on. I do want to avoid discouraging people from reading but at the same time the longer chapter style feels more natural to write, at least for me, and I don't want to change that because it might affect my ability to write. I will, however, be keeping this style of broken up chapter (14.1, 14.2, etc.) in mind if I need to use it again.
7629271 Stay tuned, things are really kicking off in the last installment of chapter 14!
7617699 Thanks! It was definitely fun to write!
7631239 I hear my therapist needs a therapist. That's some form of achievement, right?
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I bet it was man, hahaha
Welcome!
Bit of a slog to get through this chapter. BUT! I liked it One of my favourite stories out there and i'm quite picky with what i like. also good thing the part with Lyra in the fight didn't go further or i sincerely think Savage would be missing a few limbs... If not organs. Also curious if a certain lunar princess is going to be involved with Titus as well.
All in all one of my favourite stories so far and usually my comparison to other stories to measure their quality if that makes any lick of sense.
Keep up the good work!
7881781 Thank you very much! In terms of chapter length I'm making a concerted effort to break them up into "shorter" parts (see chapter 14 parts 1 & 2? Those plus part 3 and a potential part 4 were being written all as one chunk until I realized that was dumb. Talk about eye strain.) so I would be surprised if you have to slog through anything of this length from here on out.
Something like Force Crush would have been in Savage's imminent future if he had gotten any further, but Rainbow had impeccable timing with her flying tackle.
8076286 damn
*Assumes the fetal position in the furthest corner of my bed-room and whimpers.*
If I was training to be a Jedi (or already a knight) and I had to go through something similar in this chapter. I would've fallen so hard to the Dark side; I would've rebounded off the lowest floor with enough force to send me back to the side of the Light, only to shatter it all to pieces.
I'm not worthy to carry the mantle of Jedi. I'm an abomination.
Good chapter though.
"I am Queen Mother Ta'a Chume, and I approve this quote."
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Only four months late in responding but...
It's not out of the cards, I plan to touch on offspring in one form or another.
I smell a Portal reference
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Whatever! Making him lose to a rainbow-horse-faggot. Please!??!
TwilightLyraLuna -- eeeeeeee!!!!!!!! Herdy Ponies!