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6646304 Yep, that was intentional, it was jumping from the past to the future which were both being told from Titus' point of view and I wanted that last bit about making friends to tie in with him and Twilight snoozing together so I didn't feel that putting my normal divider in would help.
At first I thought you were doing a rewrite of the story, but nope, just explaining things. Because last time Twilight was very intimate with him.
Since this story have a herd sistem simmilar to Xenophilia, did you plan to add some mares in Titus's herd in the future? Especially Lyra and Luna.
6657269 That's definitely the direction the story is going, though in my opinion it's something that has to be done right as it is a very delicate thing to balance so I've been trying to set up an emotional attachment between characters instead of just throwing them all together, in which case it would (again, my opinion) feel like it's just a "And Then He Boned All The Pones" sort of deal. I don't like those.
I've given it a lot of thought and I know how I want to handle the Luna issue and it won't be touched on for a very long while, but something dealing with Lyra is coming up very soon. Soon, as in next chapter.
6790048 Ooo! I like that line of thinking, very devious. So far we have comments guessing that it's Master Krua and another that it's a fallen Jedi Knight named Vergere. I'd be interested to hear what other people think and maybe make a poll out of it, but I can tell you it won't be revealed in chapter 14 though there is a big hint being dropped if you keep an eye out for it.
6877310 <Disbelief> Has been moved into {Suspended Animation} until further notice, please hold. *Soothing elevator music begins to play on a loop
Would you stop saying 'he' has breast. Your confusing the brats.
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Except that's where her head was, it was resting on his breast a.k.a. one side of his chest.