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Close the quote at the end there.
Also I'm a bit lost, though I think that's more due to the 6 months than stuff on your part...
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Thanks, I think I left off wanting to continue with Nightwatch's dialog.
What are you lost on, maybe I can clarify or jog your memory?
It's funny, the bad guys think they will win, but the force has been used to find people across galaxies, they aren't even across the planet. Either Twilight realizes she can find him, T wakes up and uses it to find her, Luna finds him through dreams, or DeX sniffs him out. Griffin heads will roll. The true question, is are they going to roll literally, or figuratively. I love this story, can't wait to see what happens
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Mostly bits of the previous chapter (I'll probably reread it some time next week depending on how Path of Exile treats me) but also lots of minor details throughout the fic.
The unfortunate thing about the insane amounts of fanfiction I read is a lot of plot points and notable things sorta blur together, and so I can't keep some things straight. This fic is rather lucky in that it's pretty unique.
Eeexxxccellent. That's good hear.
What lies before me? A new chapter? Could it be? And while I'm tired too. Well I read through it. I don't know how you do it honestly. These big chapters are both a blessing and a curse x3
Never been the biggest fan of "princess" Twilight as to me that decision always just felt a little forced or what have you. But I'm sure if anyone can make me like princess sparklepoots it would most likely be you since your writing style suits my tired brain nicely.
Keep up the good work and looking forward to the dumb looks on the gryphons when they realized just how far up S-creek they are without paddles. As Sky Trotter said. Heads are going to roll.
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I'm honestly not a "fan" of the Princess Twilight choice the show took either but weighing the pros and cons I decided on giving it a go and there are few reasons behind implementing it here. What I can say at this point is that I wanted to create a point of strain in the future relationship, mostly one of Twilight trying to balance her the sudden influx of new responsibilities as both a Princess and Element Bearer while trying to make private time for Titus and Lyra (without stepping on their toes, of course).
The rude awakening the griffons are in for seems to be widely looked forward to...
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And this is the glorious part of herds. While Twilight is away. Lyra is at play... Ha... And hopefully one day Luna too.
I hope this is just a small splinter cell of rogue operatives though doing this. Wouldn't look good on the birdbrain empire when this gets out to the public.
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Yup, the G.R.A. is an underground militia or terrorist organization (depending on who you talk to) and is based of the real-world I.R.A.. It's not supported by any sizable portion of the griffon population due to their methods although there is also disagreement withing the organization's ranks on how they should be pursuing their goals; more on that later. The following is something you'll also find in the actual story once it's touched on so you're free to wait until then, if that's your preference, but when originally coming up with the concept I wanted a group with a motivation somewhere in a grey area.
The group is well entrenched and has chain of command ending with The Elders, and although they have established the resources they've been fighting an uphill battle. For nearly a century and a half they have been conducting attacks and sabotage strikes against the King's government to have the independent northern coastal lands relinquished after Griffonstone marched their armies north/northeast to expand their borders, bringing the once ungoverned populace under the king's rule and subjugating them to the laws of the crown while securing resources and revenue for the kingdom. Farm and grazing lands were torn up and taken from long standing families for infrastructure to be built and military outposts were constructed along the new border with the Skybreaker Mountains (the Thestral homelands) which naturally put the clans even more on edge. Fun bit of world-building, honestly!
I'm surprised that this story doesn't have its own page on TV Tropes yet.
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It certainly has been running longer than some TV series!
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You still working on this story? It's just too adorable.
This story is awesome!
I apologize, but somehow I gave is a downvote a while ago.
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I fixed it, you're in my favs now.
I'm only on chapter 11 and I started today, so I should make good progress before too long.
Please, don't stop.
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Wow, you've read A LOT in a day! Buuut you're about to hit the long chapters, so those might keep ya busy for a bit.
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Eeyup! -
(translation: Absolutely, I was working on Ch. 17 last night and now that I'm home from work I'm going back at it. Had some great brainstorms last night and as an added bonus what I had planned inadvertently tied in perfectly with what was done in an early chapter.)
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Starting the first clop chapter!!
Whooo!!!
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Starting chapter 14, end of 13 was SO sweet.
I'm totally
notplagiarizing it, at least as inspiration.❤
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I love writing mushy stuff like that and I'm glad you can find inspiration to write from it.
Why'd you make the chapters so long all of a sudden?
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I'm a pretty avid reader so some of it is that I like meaty chapters, but a lot of it has to do with how fun it is to write and that I get into a bit of a flow where I'll sit down and just hammer out a bunch of ideas. I also have a googledoc going that I access on my phone in my downtime to get snippets down before I forget them or even write whole parts of chapters (Lyra adventure/clop scene for example) both for this story and another one I'm working on when I need a change of pace. Those shorter chapters were done really early in my time getting comfortable with writing again and I think, if I were to go back and do things again, I now would have preferred getting the contents of Ch. 1-5 in a larger chapter as a sort of "arrival arc" and 6-10 as "Twi's romance arc" type of deal.
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Great question! For understanding in my story standard ponies (pegasi, earthies, and unicorns) generally have their heads on level with his hip, however my head canon is that ponies don't measure themselves to top of head and instead measure height from the base of their hoof to the highest point of their withers or shoulders (as real-world horses are), which from the Equestrian perspective would put a pony's measured height at just above his knee making Titus roughly three times the height of a pony when we use this adjustment. Confession time: I haven't actually watched that much of the show so I don't know if there are any scenes that contradict this method of measuring hoof to withers, but that's what I like to use. In regard to the Princesses, Celestia comes the closest to being eye-level with him when he is standing as she's about twice the size of a standard pony with Luna being slightly shorter than her sister, her eyes being roughly armpit level. Because of this similarity in height between the Royal Sisters and Titus the ducking through doors isn't meant to be that extreme, just a dip of the head at most through doorframes that are maybe slightly shorter due to age of the building or what have you.
Trying to base things off sitting positions is difficult because in a standard sitting position a pony doesn't lose as much of their height as a human does: assume both a pony and a human sit on the floor - a pony's front hooves remain extended at full length while their butt just drops to whatever they're sitting on. A human, however, looses all their leg length and then some as they sit on their butt. This is best visualized when you make a dog sit and then sit beside it - a dog who's head is normally hip level is suddenly on eye level with you!