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Oh twi, swearing on camera.
Looking good. I'm interested in reading more. Though the part where she is mentioning her friends coming on different days is a little odd. It just feels weird written like that. Also I believe only for rarity you start with At Noon, don't think you need that.
Minor nit - site/cite.
5680492 Fixed. Thanks for the catch!
So...Grey Jedi?
I always linked Light Side (Not really the Light Side's fault) and Jedi with the holier-than-thou dogmatic council and their stupid code (They thrown a Jedi member out of the Order and on the street for falling in Love -one of the more pure of emotions- and promote apathy for fuck sake). Sith is evil, that is not in doubt, with the potential for redeeming in some cases.
Thus, Grey Jedi all the way.
7614150 The way I see it (and how I'm trying to write this story) is that all Jedi were flawed individuals in some manner in regards to having some emotions because writing for an apathetic character is boring and, in my opinion, uninteresting to read. In this case the line between Light and Grey has been a little blurred making Jedi and their Council a bit more believable.