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Hoooooooooleeeeeeeeee assssssssssssss... now I like me a meaty chapter but... shit fuck man, this was huge. No Somber, but... Whew...
Good work! Good work... took me a couple of days to read it though, shit...
Uh... good work
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I even tried to cut it shorter! This was going to end with the first day of Titus' and Twilight's trip to Canterlot but I've moved that over to Ch. 15.
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Holy moly kid, you write a lot... and that's not a bad thing, like... whew, you dish out tons of words and I'm honestly jealous of it.
But still, while this chapter was a bit overwhelming, it was still a decent read! So keep it up, yeah?
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I don't suppose Amethyst Blade is entirely wrong in the correction here although it's a bit of a point of linguistic/terminology semantics (<--- I think that's a thing. Is that a thing? ) for which I can say I'm at fault for.
If the Apple family cart had only apples or other veggies/fruits then I think produce would be the correct term but, as I've alluded to in other chapters, AJ hauls baked goods like fritters and pies to market as well so in this case products is the proper word to cover everything she'd be selling.
I genuinely don't mind long chapters like this. Gives me something to relax with. Loving this whole Luna x Titus thing going on and personally hoping they will hook up as well as Lyra. Would also make for an interesting experience if she was in human form if something did happend. Good slice of life chapter ^^ Eagerly awaiting the next chapter and secretly hoping this won't turn out to be one of the stories that goes on permanent hiatus or downright cancelled. Loving the setup too much
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Great to hear from another reader! No permanent hiatus or cancelling happening here (short of me ending up in a coma, I suppose), although it probably feels like it's on hiatus to a lot of people who've followed the story when there's entire months that pass between chapters. No, I've got notes and scenes scribbled down that span across the whole story in a big Idea Dump chapter on my profile - even one of the final scenes is written and I'm actively filling it out further - it's just a matter of piecing them together and filling in the gaps.
Lyra x Titus is chugging along nicely and I've got what I think is an exciting scene for them for later which there's a bit of a hint at in Ch. 15 when he's visiting her. The Luna x T ship is more or less still in harbor preparing to make way but with a little bit of "help" from Celestia (like maybe the revenge prank against both of them she's building toward ) and a big scene for them before that happens after which they'll have full sails. With Luna though I didn't want to just throw them into a relationship, I'm sure as a Princess the two sisters have stallions throwing themselves at their hooves as it is without basically having Titus walk in with a flash of a suave grin and a suggestive wiggle of the eyebrows to have them swooning over him like it feels so often happens in stories like this. I want there to be a reason, damn it, some development of emotions even if it means wading through the build up to the juicy bits!
As for Chapter 15's release I'll just say check back sooner rather than later, like this weekend if I can get my shit together in terms of editing the monster.
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I wasn't trying to insinuate this taking too long :P Was just a small hope that this story doesn't die and it's good to know it won't! And also understandable with the whole Luna/T Relationship since I prefer stories with actual meat on the "bones" so to speak... Mild pun intended? Always just kind of adored Luna and her strange way of acting sometimes... Like not getting the whole "naked human" kind of deal in the latest chapter. Was fun to imagine how much T-bone was squirming inside of his skull... Ahh awkwardness ♥
Also will without a doubt check back since this is genuinely my most favorite story ^^ For whatever that counts. Also awaiting the potential awkwardness of him and Twilight getting to meet Lyra's parents. Have a good day and here's hoping T gets to show off his ship flying soon... Would give the press something to lose their minds about... "Ape takes to the sky. We're doomed."