Hi.
My name is Soul.
Don't ask about my name.
Anyway first thing first.
How did I get here? I do not know.
How is it in Equestria? Good. So far I have been living in the Everfree forest. It's a scary place. However most of the things living here are terrified of me. I also haven't made contact with any ponies. I do not know why.
I think that's as much as you need to know right?
So let's start my adventure.
I was walking around in the forest after eating lunch. I had nothing else to do. Man I missed TV.
Walking was one of my ways to past the time. I had walked this path before many times. It lead through the most peaceful part of the forest. This was so I didn't run into anything as I really wasn't bothered to deal with them.
I was about to reach the end of my walk. It ended in a open field of the forest. Where I would stare at the sky for ages until my tummy would call for me.
Speak of the devil, I notice I was here. Looking towards the middle of the field. Sat a single tree. It was calling me to it. As if I was the only one who visits it. I mean animals visits the tree. Not to sit by it of course.
I walked over to the tree and sat by it. That is when I noticed something off. The grass felt different from when I normally sat upon it. I reached with my hand to touch the grass. It felt softer.
What threw me off was that the grass started to move up and down. Of course manly me would just jump up. No I instead jumped up while almost having my heart torn out.
I quickly turn around. Only to have my heart to almost jumped out again.
There laying on the floor was a creature. Where are my manners? From what I learned here. It was an Alicorn. A white Alicorn, almost as tall as me laid there. I notice straight away small brunt marks all over her. Followed by cuts and bruises. She was bleeding slightly from the cuts.
At first I didn't want to help her. But all of a sudden I found my self rushing down to her. Damn my kindness!
Her eyes weren't open. Good, this will make it easier. I rested my hand on her chest. She was breathing slowly but steady.
I looked up after hearing a roaring sound. A storm was coming. It was not going to be any normal storm. I quickly picked up the Alicorn. Boy was she heavy! I still manage to lift her and head towards my home. Funny thing about my home. It's a cave...not much else to say.
The skies started to pour with rain as soon as I entered my home...cave.
I rested her on a pile of my clothes. I had woken up in Equestria with a few items. Clothes, Blanket and Pillow. I rest her head on my pillow then look at the entrance of the cave. It was really starting to downpour.
After a sigh, I quickly ran out and grabbed some huge leaves and vines. After collecting those I returned soaking wet. I went and sat down next to the Alicorn.
*Whack*
OW! What was that?
I jumped up looking around for the source of it. Nothing. I looked back down at the Alicorn. My heart fell.
She was awake and staring at me with one eye. Her pupil have gone small. I heard her breath quicken. She was scared of me.
I slowly took one step towards the Alicorn. She see's this and tries to get up and back away. She instead gets up only to fall back down crying out. The pain was too much for her. Her horned started to glow.
"Don't come closer!" She cried. For some reason I went closer. I couldn't help myself. "Stay back!" She cried again. However the glow around her horn started to fade.
I was now standing next to the Alicorn.
I bent down until our face met. I reached my hand out towards her head. She just laid there in shock.
I gently started to stroke her mane. Her breath started to slow down.
After a while of that. I picked up the leaves and vines. Then pointed towards her injures. She said nothing but nods slowly.
I then proceeded to use the leaves and vines as bandages. I heard her gasp when I had finish the first one. "How?" I heard her mutter under her breath. I looked back at her and smiled. She didn't know about the magic of the Everfree forest.
After I finish she let out a yawn. I pointed to my pillow to where she started at it for a while. She let's out a sigh and rests her head upon it. I then lift up the blanket and cover her. She didn't go to sleep for a while. She just stares at me.
I sighed and walked towards the corner of the cave away from her. She then proceed to fall asleep.
Of course. She was scared of me. I mean it's like trying to go to sleep while the Bogey man is standing near you.
My eyes slowly drift to the spell of sleep.
I was the first to wake out of me and the Alicorn. To the sounds of birds singing. I stretched and headed towards the nearby lake. I would catch my food here, most of the time.
After an hour of trying to get me breakfast. I manage to get one fish while also getting some things for my guest.
I entered the cave to see she is not here. She must of left already?
Wait...something didn't seemed right. I scanned the cave. Nothing looked out of place. However...
Without my body asking my brain, I spun around and grabbed....something? I heard a gasp and in my hand a white Alicorn slowly was relived. "How?" she asked again.
I signed. "Listen...Alicorn...I was kind enough to let you into my home...also I have helped you survive the night. So if you would please stop and calm down."
"You...c-can talk?" She says. I let her go making her fall to the floor.
This was going to be a long day.
Time went slowly by for me. I had manage to calm the Alicorn down and got her to stay in the cave. This was because she was too weak to go anywhere.
She had asked me many questions about me. I would ignore them. I didn't want to be studied by ponies. However some good news was that I found out who she was.
She was Celestia. An Alicorn who... You know her already don't you?
It was late and I had manage to get Celestia to sleep. I walked over to my corner of the cave. My cold, hard cave.
I laid down on the floor. Only to see a golden aurora around me. I panicked at first but calmed down once I saw it was Celestia who was using her magic. For what?
"Celestia what are you doing?" I asked.
"I can't let the host suffer when he has been so nice to me." Celestia replied. She lifted me with her magic and I flew towards her.
"Oh no. Don't you dare!" I tired to get out of her magic.
She smiled at me and lifted the blanket. Before I knew it I was in bed with her. Don't get any idea's! I tired to get out only for her to put me back in. After a couple of tries I gave up. I scooted to the end of the blanket and went to sleep.
"Hm." I mumbled. Something felt off which led me to wake up. I opened my eyes to see a blurry image. It was around midnight. But what had woken me? I felt breathing on my chest. I looked down to see none other than Celestia. She had snuggled up next to me and rested her head on my chest. I tired to move but she held me tight. Damn it! I thought to myself. Why is this happening to me?
I am not having this! I thought. "Celestia I spoke." She moaned "Celestia!" I spoke louder.
"Wh-at?" Her head rose to look at me. "What is the matter?" She asked.
"This...snuggle." I pointed at Celestia.
"What wrong with it?" She asks
"You know the answer." I replied.
She looked down for a moment then back up to me. "Sorry...it's just...your comfortable."
"I'm sorry what?" I was really confused.
"I couldn't get to sleep. So when I rolled over to get a better look at you...you felt...soft." I had no idea how to answer to what Celestia had just said. "Can we just stay like this...for this night...I am going back home tomorrow." She gave me the puppy eye look.
I really wanted to say no but... I took a deep breath then proceed to tell her my answer. "Only this once. Ok?"
A massive smile came across her face. She quickly hugged me. I felt the air leaving my Lungs. She let me go after a while and rested her head on my chest. She nuzzled my chest and then mumbled "Thank you."
I sighed and went to sleep. This better be the only day.
You know, this is one of the only stories I've read that I can't finish. Not because it has bad grammar, as is usually the case, but because I don't know what the heck is going on. I'll keep an eye on it, but no like just yet.
ur human n u lol xd xxp
Prepare for a review.
Worst. Description. Ever.
Hm, this, looks good. Even though it is mostly disliked. But then again, people have their choices.
I like it. Hilarious how Celestia uses him as a plushie and or pillow.
I...I...What is this?!
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I got my name from my parents. What's your excuse?
It's good that you're living in a scary place? You're the type to think of a Detroit slum like it's Las Vegas, aren't you?
Maybe it's because you live in a place where they aren't. I'm just guessing.
"Soul! Soooouuul! I'm over here! I have no idea why you removed me and stapled me to a tree, especially since you kinda need me to digest stuff for you, but can you take me back? It's co-o-o-o-old out here!"
Here I come, me! I better watch out.
Because sitting by trees is abnormal, like hearing voices. First your stomach, now a tree. You need some serious help, kid.
Because girly me would just jump down, and homie don't play that shit.
I imagine that's an expensive procedure, not to mention hard to do since you're jumping at the same time.
O.O
Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer co-star in Honey, I Shrunk the Princess! Coming this winter.
I tired to read this story. I go sleep now.
"Really? What did you say?"
Because fuck those other days.
This story sucks ponybutt!!!!!!!
It is difficult to understand this story. The concept of it I like, but DAYUM you need some more filler and not just blatantly put out whatever comes to your mind and post it. Take your thoughts then expand from the words. Good start though!
I'm only half a toe in and you completely ruined this whole thing. Now, I don't want to review this piece of shittttttttttttttt!
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I may review it later, keep your eyes peeled!
Why should I read your story when you can't even be bothered to type the title correctly?
I'll just leave this here.
Guys, I know who Celesita is!
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>Mexican Celestia
Any what, lets get to the review!
Short Description:
Holy fck this makes so many questions visible its not even funny.
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This is, uhm, an interesting way to draw a reader in. I'll admit, it worked for a while. (Not counting why Celestia would imprison you) Then I saw THIS.
Where is the sex tag? Where is the bondage warning? I'm already terrified.
Long Description:
Why are you named Soul? Why do I care about your name if you won't even explain why it's important? You even politely say "Hi," and then you quickly say "Don't ask."
Oh, and also.
Alright, if you noticed I haven't picked apart the grammatical errors. I don't wanna. But hang on, when people THANK you for something, they don't NEED your permission. They are GRATEFUL. You don't wanna...like, deny them saying something like: "Oh thank you, Mister! Please, take this box of chocolates as a thanks!" You don't push that back like some jackss.
CELESTIA IS OFFERING THANKS TO SOMEBODY.
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You just gave away the whole story. THE WHOLE, STORY. You had this surprise, and sure you had it in the title, but COME ON. You can't reveal it in the story? You could have added some suspense or something to make me a little interested.
But then again...
IDUWANNADODASTOWYNEXT.
IDUWANNA.
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I read while I listened to your magnificent reading voice,
Awesome chapter you doing a amazing job i can't wait to see the next chapter
I like the story, but somehow i get the feeling that the story could turn out a way i donĀ“t like. I think it is only because i once read a similar story, at least with Celestia and a Human and it turned out not very well.
I give the story a change, till now i like it.
Trollfic! Definitely trollfic! Retreat! RETREAT!
This is a good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
I find this interesting please make more chapters ps som people dislike this but don't write for the haters write for those who enjoy your work
interesting, I like it. . . .you have my attention
One paragraph in... looks promising. (scrolls down to post comment) Hot, dang! That's a LOT of negative comments! Still gonna read but... wow I felt a little kick in the gut of the kindness toward you humans. (shakes head ) Some of you should be ashamed. I don't think it's necessary to say (in beg read letters) that a WORK IN PROGRESS story is utter garbage. Good reviews (even by people that despise to the care what they are reviewing... to the point of saying "it was so cat killing-ly bad...") don't just say: "THIS IS UTTER TRASH", they may say "THIS IS UTTER TRASH" but it will also have "but at least the story was interesting and with better actors and a better director, it could have been much more engaging." My point is that: you should at least say something good about what it is your saying is a peace of sh*& when your calling it a piece of Sh*&. Now, if you exuse me, I'm going to read this and put in my 2 cents.
Finished, and I will admit, there were a lot of grammar mistakes. But it wasn't "a piece of sh&^" as you humans have put it. The story was good, great even, and I can't wait to see where this is going! Keep it up !
Not sure if trollfic...