Wat no ew I do not want.

Ok maybe a little!

5298266 Ahaha

Well this was or rather felt a bit rushed. I'm used to a little more build up on the actual sex parts but this was... quick. The sexual bits (And I do mean bits.) Were good but I wished they would last a bit longer, but alas there pretty quick. Oh well.

In total this fic was... okay. Some parts could use a little more filler I guess, I know the mods don't like padding or filler but this story could use some. Better to have some filler rather than none I say. You should continue to work on this and fix it up, I know you can do it I believe in you.

Now have a nice day.
Sincerely: Ernest

There's a few short comings and it was short. also. but other than that, it was great!

Judging by the descriptions of all of your fics, this "you" guy gets laid a lot.

Well... that escalated quickly.
But, I can't say I didn't enjoy it. Mostly because it was Sunset. It certainly was a magical time.

MAKE A PART TWO! I greatly enjoyed it

i could sworn i saw you post a new chapter

5328724 Yes I agree. It states in the feed that "Life Rocks The House Down" was added. Now I want to see it.

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i think he deleted because i already set my option soo i can see any mature content fanfiction

Dude, where's the next chapter I got a notification saying u posted it

5330409 Well now I'm depressed.

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he deleted alright

Yeah. Sorry about that guys. When you read it, even when it's still up there. You guys probably wouldn't like it, because I messed up big time on it, and I was getting it done before school started back. So yeah. I'm really sorry I disappointed in you all, so I'll make it up to you. Some time this week. I'll put up a new chapter to see what I can come up with. I promise, I hope it'll be good. Like I said, I'm really sorry I disappointed in you guys. Forgive me?

Don't sweat it.

When the update

It's good, could be a bit more descriptive in the sex but overall not that bad

So, was it all just a set-up?

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Nope. Theres gonna be more, though it may take a while since that I'm starting to run low on ideas. So yeah.

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Thanks for that man. I'll fix' em.

I like it, but this is not at all how the mane 6 would act, human or not. Well, maybe Sunset and Rainbowdash, but I can't imagine the others acting like this.

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I can't imagine any girl(s) would setup something like that.

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WTF do you think!?

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This is a fanfic, why are you questioning the morals and personality of the humane 7?

Sometimes truth or dare can lead to great things.