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Tinted Dawn


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This story is a sequel to It all started with a bouquet


Tinted Dawn has been working at the rainbow factory for a year now. When she moves to the upper factory she meets her boss for the very first time but it isn't who she expected

Original Rainbow Factory fan Fiction: Aurora Dawn Read Original here!

I also wan't to thank my friend Puppy Lover with proof reading and continuing to encourage me to become a writer.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

This, will be interesting :3

Comment posted by Tinted Dawn deleted Nov 20th, 2014

More, I need more!!!! :3

5293079 Working on chapter 3 as I type! (Speak) almost done! :twilightsmile:

5293356 Awesome! This is such a great story!

5294839 So glad you think so. :pinkiehappy: having put together each chapter together in an hour and a half each + minimal editing. that means allot 4 me :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Chapters are short, description of a Rainbow Factory fic is beyond typical...and Tinted Dawn feels like a self-insert.

“Anything for you, you can even live with me in my house.” Dash said perking up “I’m one of the only ponies that can leave the factory”
Dawn muzzled her sister in gratitude as they left the room to begin the days work…

T-that was... awful. I t-think I h-have cancer now...

Well i'm sorry Windlife, :applecry:

I'm still a young writer and have a lot to learn. And I take some comments seriously like yours :fluttercry:, and i know how you feel as well. All i need is a dislike than i know i need to fix it. Plus I said it needs some revising. I could keep listing the stuff i need to work on but like i said, a dislike shows that you need something better and i will try. :twilightsheepish:

And plz dont mention cancer... its not funny for me :twilightangry2: . Plz and thank you :raritywink:

Comment posted by Blue Stripe deleted Jan 18th, 2015

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Can you possibly say my name in mail so it's not out on the internet :ajbemused: plz and thank you blue stripe :trollestia:
and here have a stash :moustache:
P.s I deleted ur comment b/c No real name on Fim:fiction just in one-on-one mail or irl talk plz:twilightblush: sarry.

>>Windlife

You shouldn't be so mean. I may just know Tinted a little through her works, but thats still no excuse to be so mean. You remind me of the Baka-san that are Flim and Flam

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