This story is a sequel to It all started with a bouquet
Tinted Dawn has been working at the rainbow factory for a year now. When she moves to the upper factory she meets her boss for the very first time but it isn't who she expected
Original Rainbow Factory fan Fiction: Aurora Dawn Read Original here!
I also wan't to thank my friend Puppy Lover with proof reading and continuing to encourage me to become a writer.
This, will be interesting :3
5289920 Sure Hope so
More, I need more!!!! :3
5293079 Working on chapter 3 as I type! (Speak) almost done!
5293356 Correction Done
5293356 Awesome! This is such a great story!
5294839 So glad you think so. having put together each chapter together in an hour and a half each + minimal editing. that means allot 4 me
Chapters are short, description of a Rainbow Factory fic is beyond typical...and Tinted Dawn feels like a self-insert.
T-that was... awful. I t-think I h-have cancer now...
Well i'm sorry Windlife,
I'm still a young writer and have a lot to learn. And I take some comments seriously like yours , and i know how you feel as well. All i need is a dislike than i know i need to fix it. Plus I said it needs some revising. I could keep listing the stuff i need to work on but like i said, a dislike shows that you need something better and i will try.
And plz dont mention cancer... its not funny for me . Plz and thank you
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Can you possibly say my name in mail so it's not out on the internet plz and thank you blue stripe
and here have a stash
P.s I deleted ur comment b/c No real name on Fim:fiction just in one-on-one mail or irl talk plz sarry.
>>Windlife
You shouldn't be so mean. I may just know Tinted a little through her works, but thats still no excuse to be so mean. You remind me of the Baka-san that are Flim and Flam