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I like the story so far! Some grammar and spelling checks need to be done, but it's very good.
5322759 Thank you so much for the comment! It really means a lot to me. I will take all of your points into account, this is my first fanfic but I will defiantly try to improve on it. Again thank you and have a good day.
Ps: congratulations your the first person to comment! :)
Thanks! When this becomes a big thing, I can brag about it! 5322925
5323033 Hopefully it will! Thanks for the confidence, really helps! Thanks again!
Ps: Of course you can brag about it!
I like how you set this up so far. And much better spelling and stuff too.
And me, I have a very literal mind, so when you said about the shells moving them like paper, my mind immediately went to actual paper. Everything paper XD
I like how you set this up so far. And much better spelling and stuff too.
And me, I have a very literal mind, so when you said about the shells moving them like paper, my mind immediately went to actual paper. Everything paper XD
5343141 Hello again ThePoet. Sorry for the late reply, I've been very busy but anyway...
Thank you so much for the comment, always appreciated.
I've got to say, I wasn't to sure about the set up for this chapter, but my confidence has been reassured, thanks to you.
Also I personal thank you again for complementing my grammar and description in the chapter. I will always try to make it better and better every hoof step of the way.
And as I always I say...
Thank you very much for the comment and I hope to see you in the comments section again soon!
Have a good day ThePoet.
Ps: you must love paper.
Hi again!
Very good chapter. Reminds me of the song Loalty, by Mandopony. For obvious reasons.
Bit yeah, overall good, spelling improving, and nothing about punctuation getting worse.
You get an A+! :D
Hello again 5383936 Sorry for the late response but anyway, as I always say. Thank you for the comment, it always helps. Glad to see you like the chapter, it was a very long one and did drain my a lot of my time. Thankfully it was all worth it!
I hope to see you again in the comments soon!
Have a good a ThePoet.
Ps: Firstly, YES A+ WHOOO!!! THANKS!!! Secondly, never heard of Loyalty by Mandopony before, going to check that out.
And finally. I may be doing a short story soon, but that doesn't mean I am abandoning this one. On the contrary, it may or may not link to story directly, so yeah that's it.
Those deleted comments were just accidents, sorry.
Okay, pretty good. Short, but I like the war.
Don't know why I like it. But I do.
5501054 Glad you like it!
I'm working on my next chapter at the moment, which will still focus on the current meeting at hand, but will go back to the war pretty soon!
Thanks for commenting and have a good day.
Why aren't there any ratings on this fic? I'm confused...