I like how you set this up so far. And much better spelling and stuff too.

And me, I have a very literal mind, so when you said about the shells moving them like paper, my mind immediately went to actual paper. Everything paper XD

I like how you set this up so far. And much better spelling and stuff too.

And me, I have a very literal mind, so when you said about the shells moving them like paper, my mind immediately went to actual paper. Everything paper XD

5343141 Hello again ThePoet. Sorry for the late reply, I've been very busy but anyway...

Thank you so much for the comment, always appreciated.
I've got to say, I wasn't to sure about the set up for this chapter, but my confidence has been reassured, thanks to you.
Also I personal thank you again for complementing my grammar and description in the chapter. I will always try to make it better and better every hoof step of the way.

And as I always I say...

Thank you very much for the comment and I hope to see you in the comments section again soon!

Have a good day ThePoet.

Ps: you must love paper.