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Zan and the cage of doom

Zan maxwell was just minding his own business, when suddenly the lord of chaos offers him a deal he couldn't refuse. Now he's stuck in the cage, with a certain deranged purple mare trying to figure out what he is.

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Doggi

Doggi #1 · Oct 11th, 2014 · · ·

OHO

SUN-1105

SUN-1105 #2 · Oct 11th, 2014 · · ·

There is 216 pencil fragments on the floor if my maths is right...

aidenmc3

aidenmc3 #3 · Oct 11th, 2014 · · ·

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Thanks for responding! I tried to write something before this but it went into disarray and destruction almost immediately. If i dont have a plan already laid out the entire story turns into rubble,.

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I honestly did not expect that anyone except me to think about the total number of broken pencils. I guess i give you a cookie and a pinkie?

Eclipse H Discordia

Eclipse H Discordia #4 · Oct 15th, 2014 · · ·

I like this. Would you make this a story, if possable?

aidenmc3

aidenmc3 #5 · Oct 15th, 2014 · · ·

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I could if you would like, but the main problem for me is that in my mind I had his as a one shot, so the story never professed farther then this. I'll have to come up now with something original and to also go and add some three demenional depth to Zan. Again, the characgter hasn't anywhere near professed this point. I you would like to leave some suggestions I could go about writing some new chapters though.

Eclipse H Discordia

Eclipse H Discordia #6 · Oct 15th, 2014 · · ·

5144379 Well, I would like this to be a story, but that is for you to decide. I would leave some suggestions, but that will haft to wait, for I am too tired to think of any right now. I will add some, though.