Scootaloo and Rumble have been long time friends and nothing more. When Rumble makes a bold move to 'hangout' the two realize just how 'friendly' they are to each other..
Each of them knew what they really wanted...
That one earth pony who writes things and stuff
Scootaloo and Rumble have been long time friends and nothing more. When Rumble makes a bold move to 'hangout' the two realize just how 'friendly' they are to each other..
Each of them knew what they really wanted...
It has promise, but you really need an editor. I would offer, but I have a ton of stuff to edit already so if no one has offered later I'll give it consideration. Anyways, good luck with your story!
Till the next one
-R
Great start, but need a little work or an editor
Yessss, Rumbloo...
Alright i am going to need to start the 2nd chapter then so i need anyone as an editor maybe two even
Chapter 2 is in but not edited my editor is looking at it now so if there are any mistakes plz comment them. thx for motivating me to write more.
Hey,not a bad story
I always wanted to read a decent scootaloo/rumble story.
I mean not everyone makes it though,only a few
thx Chrome Reader. i tried. it really does mean a bunch that i may actually be considered as a decent fic writer.
Nothing else to read...
I hope the feed doesn't betray me this time, like other times...
5256861 sadly chapter 3 is still in production...
5259156 But there will be Chapter 3, better than other fics.
Can't wait for the the chapter.
FINALLY. Chapter 3 took way longer than i thought it would. thxs life. anyways check it out and if enough people like it maybe ill continue to make a chapter 4. im still torn on the idea though so no promises.
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Well with that compliment how could i say no?
i think ill get started cuz i have quite a few ideas
After the word wait I was like, 'Until the next episode of America's Next Top Model!'
To whom it may concern, I have finished the outline to chapter 4 so hiatus is over. Let's get these creative juices flowing again
very interesting start
kissy kissy ;)