Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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Moar ! :D
ok I am feeling bad for Luna and Fredrick this has got be like the 4th time that were interrupted.
a vary good chapter, I cant weight to see how there up coming weekend works out.
Isn't that always the way these things go?
5685660 Nothing was gonna happen anyways. Open office hours and what not, though I'm considering in the future having them get caught fucking each other lol
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...I'm on board with that.
funny thing is, I was looking at this in my favourites and wondering when the next chapter was being released
an hour or so later and this chapter pops up, weird
this, along with the description of Blueblood a few chapters back, is why I love this story
it's both beautiful and disturbing at the same time
*Rarity voice* Iiideeeeaaaaa! *back to normal* Why not have Fredrick and Luna gang up on Celestia in the prank war? That way they can prank her seperately and jointly, coordinating their pranks to chain together for an even bigger impact.
Murphy strikes again!
Omg! Fred should totally prank Celestia. She would totally think it was Luna at first. Then she later finds out it was Fred. That would be epic!
Murphy enjoys giving out blue balls today, doesn't he?
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Ya know, I think introducing a Guard with the name Murphy might be kek-worthy
5685991 It's going to be funny when we see it.
That reminds me of something, Blueblood, you're a badass.
5685991 What would be appropriate is every guard realizes what Luna and Fred are doing behind closed doors, except him. So they just send him to alert Luna when ever something comes up.
Blueblood seems to be the best ally anypony should want. Do not fuck with him.
As always, Great chapter
credit where it's due, that bastard Blueblood can really be persuasive
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I have to admit, i like this take on Blueblood. Still a bit of an ass, but an ass that works for the good people rather then against.
5686309 agree....but it still a big dick-move on his part for blackmailing a friend...
5686889 I wouldn't say a friend per-sey. Never stated that they were friends at all actually. Just a colleague. Pawns in the game of politics.
neat
stayclassy
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I wouldn't say good. He has his own agenda, but he knows how to get shit done. Kinda how I work when it comes to revenge. take them out financially. fuck them over in the long term
Dat ending XD
Giggity.
Everyone loves boobs
...says my surrogate sister
5687269 Oh, clearly. But he's at least useful.
The one thing I hate is when people use Blueblood as a generic villain simply because they don't like him. I find it pointless and uncreative, unless it involves the various royals directly.
You know the moment luna took off her jacket I couldn't stop wondering how the heck pegasi and alicorns put shirts, t-shirts, jackets and the like on what with their wings and such. It was really distracting
good job keep it up
5688547 ever read the Maximum Ride series? Same way they do. Cut slits in their shirts and jackets for their wings
Friggin' hilarious.
Well...
Another hilarious and sexy chapter. Carry on!
Are every single guard as well servant in the castle hell bent on getting the title the greatest cockblocker in Equestrias history?
5688772 nope never read the maximum ride series but I did kinda figure they cut slits in the backs for the wings but it's more the how big are the slits that I'm wondering
I guess being male would be much easier, not being chest deep and all.
No one's looking at Twilight, but we're all thinking it.
Then how do they fit under a jacket? Need to know how wide the span is to get a guess at how they would fold.
Another great chapter, and no typos jumped out at me this time. There is all this back and forth teasing about actual sex and yet there hasn't been any good desk shattering pounding. That is, unless some of poor Twilight's furniture is going to be thoroughly abused.
5689516 I'm just taking the cartoon interpretation, where they can expand out to a decent size but when passively folded on their backs/sides, they take up little space, so they could easily fit under her jacket so long as she doesn't get aroused lol.
And I'm glad you're still enjoying the ride! No, no actual sex just yet but after 10 parts in, it won't be much longer. You're thinking ahead lol, perhaps Twilight's furniture will be destroyed by a coital strike... perhaps it won't. We'll just have to see
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twilight has a book fetish, atleast we were thinking it.
And it's funny to see them denied again...
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at least he isn't telling you to follow to him to a bathhouse.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
Moar please! ^^
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He's supporting the human...that's different (And thegreatest one of a kind twist I've ever seen) from all the fic's I have seen.
99% of fic's I read blue blood is insulting the human or calling them a "wild animal"
1% (AKA this story) has blue blood SUPPORTING and ASSISTING him.
That alone makes the story 95% different from other fic's.
And to the author of this fic...kudo's...all the possible kudo's in the world now belong to you...
5700630 He is, though for his own reasons. Definitely not out of the goodness of his heart (at this moment). It's nice to be able to spin him differently yet still make it believable to the masses. That was my ultimate goal.
I like it thus far, but please don't make it too tense. I can almost see some way that Blueblood would try to take over the kingdom using this relationship, and I really would rather have a romance than a political drama. It kinda kills the mood for me when someone's threatening to ruin your life and stage a coup and it somehow being all your fault while you're just minding your own business and trying to please your
girlbest friend.5703716 Blackmail isn't staging a coup. The Princesses would instantly have his asses at any point if he tried. Blueblood's ventures are going to be asides, popping up once every couple of chapters to demonstrate progress, and are usually more for hilarity purposes as you can see by the language used. There's no alternate taking over the kingdom coup d'etat going on here. His intentions were clearly stated 'internally' in like, Part VI or V I think.
5703725 So, he's not going to be a hate sink? (I think that's a word they use) That's a relief. Blueblood is one of those characters that shouldn't be instantly written off as a douchebag based on one major appearance. But that's just my opinion is all.
5718984 Oh he's a massive dick still, as clearly seen... but a cool dick
5719821 ...Is that good or bad, considering that I kinda like Blueblood?
5719838 Nah, definitely good, at least in my eyes
I'm getting a strong Tyrion Lannister vibe from Blue Blood, (and I totally read that line in Tyrions voice). He's still a bit of a dick, but he's a cool dick.
"...I milked my eel into a pot of turtle stew,I flogged the one-eyed snake, I skinned my sausage. *Chains rattle* I made the bald man cry into the turtle stew, which I do believe my sister ate or at least I hope she did..."
5689695 good job on making blueblood's propensity to be one magnificent asshole work in a story and be funny as all hell. if I could uprate this story ten times, I would.
Damn BlueBlood, I like your "persuasion".
Again, poor Luna and Fred, they just can't have a spare moment for themselves.
Great chapter!
I really like this Blueblood. Totally believable and not the usual trope of dumb spoiled royal brat.