Twilight never became an alicorn princess and instead lost her life as a result of Star-Swirl the Bearded's unpredictable spell. But being dead doesn't prevent Twilight from visiting those she cares for...
Twilight just accidentally killed everyone in Ponyville. Celestia's coming to visit later that day. She has to think of something to keep her from finding out, and fast.
Twilight Sparkle travels to Canterlot seeking justice. When one of her friends is taken captive, Twilight sets out with spell and sword to save her. (Sequel to The Sword Coast, inspired by the Baldur’s Gate series)
Sunset Shimmer: Princess Twilight Sparkle's most faithful student. After bearing witness to the End of the World, she travels back in time to destroy the Dark Regalia and save her future. But a ghost from the past has other plans...
For me is mostly the same, a cleaner or editor, because the history in theory only need to be cleaned or edited to make it a little more understable and take out the gramatical problems.
Hmm... content-wise, it a rather strong story of Celestia the tyrant. However, I’ll be honest with you, there are plenty of recurring issues pertaining to capitalization and punctuation as well as mixed up past and present tenses. If you want, I can look at it and give you some basic tips of how to find and correct these problems yourself
Honestly, I see no difference between reading a new and an old story. It’s not like their message would fade away with time, after all. You’re welcome!
Oh boy, the grammar Nazis are going to have a field day here
4888815 Yeah, Sorry, maybe I need to find a cleaner
This story is a huge exercise in Dadaism...actually, no, it's a grammatical mess.
No offense meant, but I'm assuming English isn't your first language? Because "cleaner" indicates that (the term usually used is editor.)
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For me is mostly the same, a cleaner or editor, because the history in theory only need to be cleaned or edited to make it a little more understable and take out the gramatical problems.
And yes, is not my first language.
the only thing that was bad is your writing I mean come on
4889529 hmm english not your first language understandable
Hmm... content-wise, it a rather strong story of Celestia the tyrant. However, I’ll be honest with you, there are plenty of recurring issues pertaining to capitalization and punctuation as well as mixed up past and present tenses. If you want, I can look at it and give you some basic tips of how to find and correct these problems yourself
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I know, it was a old thing in my head that I put in here... It could not be much, but in that time I decided to put it.
It's a surprise that someone decided to read it. Thank You.
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No problem, I don’t blame you for that.
Honestly, I see no difference between reading a new and an old story. It’s not like their message would fade away with time, after all. You’re welcome!