When Earth reaches Equestria they find the ponies, a peacefull folk that has no problem with sharing their recources. The two live in peace until the changelings appear...
This FimFic is being written by three different people, so writing styles are different.
Rated teen for future gore and minor swearing. Have fun reading!
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Perf.
*sigh* When will they learn?
Indent your paragraphs. Capitolize both Earths, how do you not know to do that? You live on it!
This makes no sense.
NEVER EVER use numbers, say it how it is. This isn't some texting conversation with your mom.
Again with the numbers. Also you forgot a period.
If you want any help with future chapters and stories I'd be happy to do so.
4845274 Editing it now, thank you for it, this is my first fic I have written so far, so thank you .
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Your welcome. If you want help with anything else, just tell me.
This... Needs a LOT of work. But I think it has potential to be an interesting story. Rather than three people working on separate chapters each, perhaps you should all work together on one, longer chapter. Just a thought. I'll keep my eye on this story.
4845549 Hmmm, that indeed may be a better Idea
Our first idea was to kinda have 2 perspectives, that meet later in tje story, which will be soon!
Thanks for the idea though :)
I suggest a proofreader.
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