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Daring Doo sees Rainbow Dash flying around and decides to join in with her, but will bad grammar and punctuation get in the way of the story? No. It actually improves once she gets a letter from Derpy. After that, she has a party with Dash, Twilight and Fluttershy and both her and RD get drunk. Who knows what happens next..? Only the people who read it do!
(Implied mis-spell in title, ok.)
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raibnow dash?
> Writes an entire story
> Mispells title
WTF dude, how you got this on the front page scares me, and seriously, What the fuckin fuck, you wrote only 1,308 words and all of that in seven chapters. Who the hell are you and how are you that awesome?
"Ohmanohmanohmanohmanohman!" Scootaloo figuratively flies down the steep hill, the wheels of her scooter finding little purchase on the grassy incline. With her tiny wings aflutter, the orange flavored pegasus reaches the shallow dip between her past life and the launch pad that will take her into the hereafter. With one final, quick burst of speed, she propells herself upwards and offwards, soaring in some sort of shape akin to an arc.
"Oh its as if I can fly!" she whispers excitedly to no one in particular, the wind whooshing by and messing with her hair like some sort of unappreciated uncle would, handing out noogies to nieces and nephews left and right. "You are flying," whispers a voice into her head. Scootaloo looks around and suddenly notices that her plan is going awry! No longer traveling in a parabola, she soars through the air, the rocky cliffside growing smaller underneath her hoofshoes. She looks up to see none other than Rainbow Dash, that asshole, carrying her! "NO! RAIBNOW DASH I MUST SUFFER THE FATE OF MY ANCESTORS!" Scootaloo cries and wriggles her armlegs uselessly.
"Not today, sweetmeat. You're going to the frontpage with me."
This is my [accurate] review of the story. Place yourself, dear reader, in the position of the fated equine.
This is easily the best fanfiction ever made.
raibnow dash attracted me here
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Implied spelling mistake.
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I implied the mis-spelling.
It was in conjunction with the bad spelling at the start
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epic story
i couldnt believe it
how do you do it
7 chapters
1300 words approx
and PURPOSEFULLY MADE SPELLING AND GRAMMAR BAD
then good
i just cant see how you can make this better
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I am
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Dude, you were all like, I wrote this, and I was like, what the fuckin fuck, then you were like, alraht!, then I was like totally about to send a hate message then remembered why I give yuou this much respect.
Basically, don't start witht eh BS on, I'm RB. You ruined it, congratulations.
Boom, headshot, be the bullet, sniper spree, triple kill.
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, right?
wut
I'm still
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Lets face it, Chief, you got the overkill, don't over sell it, don't milk it.
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Seriously, fail. Nothing you said about me or what I thought was true. I'm surprised not because of the story, but how it is made. Each chapter is only a few hundred words, though standard for a good writer well on his/her way to greater heights and better ideas/stories, the whole thing is misspelled in some chunks of it, I can see that it must've been misspelled either on purpose, or a form of on off thought on watching what is typed was done.
Rarity was too fat to fit through the door
What is this? Maybe you should combine all this into one chapter.
My god it's been a while. How are all of ya? I see the theme changed and I got 1,800 views on this shitty story (thanks there
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Well, you guys have been waiting for far too long. I better release another story.
Opened the letter and BOOM! Everything's okay now? Wat?
And now it's all misspelled again...cuz their drunk?