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MisterMoniker


What the hell is a pony?


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Rainbow Dash finally writes her first fanfiction! It's daring, it's provocative, and she did it all by herself. Her friends, however, decide that as proud as they are that Rainbow has taken her first step into the wide world of online literature, they can't in good conscience let her do it her way.

What do they do? Well, obviously... improve it.

Rated Teen (sex) for major sauciness.

Vector used with permission from Hampshireukbrony.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

Ooh, saucy.

Awesome, saucy, and well done!

Loved helping you with this!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Oh... my...

Take it, take it... go on. Take it.

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Princess bride reference aw yea!!!!!! Besides that very well written and thoroughly enjoyed

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Naturally.
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Thanks again, dude!
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Yissssssssssssssssss
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Nice catch! And thanks, heheh.

A/N: I’m not a virgin.

huehuehuehuehuehuehuehuehue... ... ... hue.

Still not taking PtD's spot as favorite, but this was funny.

This made my penis into the big penis



:trixieshiftright:

:trixieshiftleft:

When my bro Sabre sent me this, I didn't know what to think.

After reading it, though, I gotta say, I fucking loved it. This is fucking art.

gg

-Will

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YOUR LOYALTY IS NOTED

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Your penis is basically the biggest penis

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This comment made my fucking day.

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Thanks!

This was fun to read.

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Glad you liked it, Miz Do.

That ending was GOLD.

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Thanks! Had a couple different ideas for how I wanted to wrap it up, but I'm glad I decided on featuring Celly.

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