You seem to have javascript disabled, or your browser is failing to execute it properly. Much of Fimfiction's functionality requires javascript so we suggest you turn it on!

Black Crystals

Prince Zero, son of Queen Chrysalis and King Sombra has come to wreak havoc upon Equestria. He will meet new friends, new enemies and the famous Princess's Luna and Celestia. Will Zero follow the path of his father and bring the ponies of Equestria to their knees... or will he find another path... another destiny.

Chapters (2)

Comments ( 4 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 4
- Newest First
- Oldest First

DBP12012

DBP12012 #1 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · · Prince Zero ·

Pretty interesting start, despite a few minor hiccups with the pacing and grammar. I see you're a new user. Great! I'd love to see where this goes. If you need an editor/proofreader/pre-reader, I'd be happy to help.

Write on, DBP

Rainbowdashfangirl12