Something happens that leaves Fluttershy a wreck.
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- Member Since 29th Jun, 2014
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Flaming cheese
I'm not good with people but I love to write...
Flaming cheese
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hay you made a spelling misake "I do t want you to go please stay here!" 11 linse from the botim 4th word.
this is sad
but it seemed a bit rushed.. 
4745208 it was kinda rushed, I started it on my iPod but it flew out if my pocket in a motorcycle. Then it rained for 3 days straight and I looked for it but couldn't find it...
4745539 That sucks im sorry
4747780 eh, stuff happens.
At least you did a good story
Waaaayyyy btter than my first sad fic. You deserved 10 moustaches!!
4749446 why thank you sir!
4750410
I'm a girl....
4758569 then thank you kind madam.
4763431
Ok. Thanks :)
Ohh my gosh, I love this story!
It's so sad though.
4804473 I'm not very good at cheery or happy writing...
For a first Fic I have to admit I am impressed, the only major problem that I can find with it is that Dash's explanation came too quickly.(then again the entire fic is only 1,254 words long so you couldn't have left it much longer)
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Hey, Flaming cheese.
I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. So much that I did a dramatic reading of it.
Here's the video link to my dramatic reading of it.
Video Link: Dramatic Reading #2: My Little Pony Fan-fiction "One Last Visit"
I hope you like it.