• Member Since 18th Jul, 2014
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StarsongtheAlicorn


Hi, I'm a pegisister artist and I also love to write stories. Sorry if I lack in good writing skills.

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The Doctor, Starsong, and Sparkina are on an Adventure of epic proportions. When they land in 1882 in Scotland after the last experience with Queen Victoria they find out the werewolves have returned. Can they save Scotland and history?

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Remember to put a space whenever someone else is talking. Ex:

"R-Rarity?" Sweetie Belle asked, her heart beginning to beat rapidly at the creature before her.

"Rarity is gone." the creature replied before lunging at the scared filly.

4719627 All Right! I will remember to edit and remember that for the next story thank you!

It's interesting ... keep it up !
(I'm a pretty hard to please critic so after a very ... short time i give you're story ... so far ... 6.43 out of 10) I hope to see improvements.:moustache:

4719627 I came up with 3 whole story ideas in my head just from reading these two lines...

5007057 Thanks so much for the positives! I will be working on my writing more! Thank you so much!:pinkiehappy:

5015082 Glad to know I inspire other stories! That makes my day!:twilightsmile:

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