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Interesting thing... Velvet having the identical mark as Twilight, except for the colors ... And since silver is the color all about psychic abilities, telekensis and a good conductor for the energies either removing them, or changing the way someone thinks ... and black is all about things that are hidden, mysterious ... and even a bit scary.
I hope that little Earth Pony filly decides to stay on the ship. Then Rye Mash can have a friend his age and a future shipping. Rye Mash + random Earth Pony filly who has yet to be named = Berry Punch's great grandparents.
Eeyup
Oof, infection on the face.... >.<
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Eenope
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Don't take this seriously. I'm just being silly.
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No worries.
But the future shipping is already planned.
And no, it isn't Velvet.
4799015 Ok, I don't even ship Rye and Velvet.
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It states the name in the story if you read.
I've felt I had nothing useful to contribute other than my great enjoyment of a story, but this made me burst out laughing. You're truly skilled.
Skeeter nodded, touched his friend with a wing, and Rye found himself feeling a better.
I Would Change it to "and Rye found himself feeling a bit better."
The sleeping quarter that Rye moved though held sixteen ponies
1. Through.
Thay'd be capitalized , since It's a proper noun, not an indefinite.
i typed this on my mobile debice which is why i cant grammar right now
Having had more time to think about this I really do feel bad about this filly. Conscious of her need for protection would be huge, but another major factor would be after having been degraded in the way she was; desperately wanting affirmation that she hadn't been devalued beyond being desirable/ loveable anymore.
5068619 yeah, that's definitely one of kudzu's finest lines of dialogue.
Totally not an ancestor of who I think he is
Nice job man, nice job!
Ouchy for Skeeter, hehe
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I know that's quite the heart breaker.
Given that I know more about penises than what might be considered normal, I can deem this description accurate. At least, though, it wasn't like an echidna's. Those things are terrifying.
7567418 I once catsit for a cat breeder. She told me how one of the lady cats would have sex with one of the males, and how the barbs would hurt her. So she would smack him in the face as hard as she could with her paw, and the rest of the day he'd be totally submissive towards her.
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Is crab apple part horse as well? Cuz i mean... a cargo net... damn...
I do believe, that should be "We'll be in the city"
Also the wrong version of a few words, notably "to" where 'too' should be. You always keep the "There, Their, and They're Rule" in mind, also known as the "To, Too and Two Rule" by the way. Probably would be a good idea to get a program like Grammarly to help you out a bit.