Dark shadow is tired of being hated. So what if he was a changeling? His species attacked Equestria not him
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This is my first story
hope you like
Dark Shadow?
I'm sorry, but your story will probably be ripped to shreds for that alone. Almost any character name involving darkness is likely to be received with eye-rolling and irritation.
Also, your description is about as generic as it gets, and it seems way too short for a "finding your place" story. Finally, your grammar needs work.
Better luck next time.
4682908 thank you for the feed back
4682908 For a first story its nice. I do resent the hating your own species tho.
This could be lengthened into a 25,000 word story at least, it's a little too fast. Also, I don't think he had to permanately turn into a pony , it would have been better if he made peace with the world in his Changeling form. However, this does have my like. It was a good story, even if it could be made better.
4682995 i will keep,that in mind
4683033 i agree but i didnt want to make it too long because its my first story
4683083 Congrats then! My first story was 8,000 words, but people didn't like it very much. (I think the reason people didn't like it had something to do with the destruction of humanity.) Of my 5 stories, 4 of them are more than one chapter. The one that is one chapter was a side-story. I tried to write a one-shot, but somebody told me it could have been a 100k word epic... So, that's what I started turning it into. Everybody has a different writing style and what they're good at, based on this story I think you'd be good at longer stories. Go write more, I'll be watching.
4683129 expect a new story within the following week
Did you base this story off the blog darkiethechangeling from tumblr?
4683252 no i didnt
4685595 oh alright