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The Twisted Scripter


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Before the celestial reign or the Solar empire, two walks of life held the land. These were the earth-bound Equus (ponies) and the ethereal Jinn. The Jinn dominated the Equus with their chaotic powers, and the Equus neeled before them as slaves. On the brink of suffering, the Equus cry out for a hero. To answer the call, six heroes with immense magical abilities created a prison that could hold all of the Jinn known as The Clow ( an ancient book that bound the souls of the Jinn within its pages). Millennia have passed since it was used and the seal begins to weaken. In order to save the equus from subjugation, six more heroes must rise in order to save them.

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Comments ( 4 )

You forgot to add genre tags.

you were a guaranteed corps the minute the group found you

It's spelled corpse

with a flash of her hands

I didn't see anything saying they were humans or anthros so you may want to change that.
And also I don't remember seeing what kind of pony Thomas is, so clarification on that would be wonderful, but other then that great story Sharkey I hope to see more of it in the future.

Thank you I did not catch that. I will revise it.

Great chapter I can't wait to see where this goes in the future and also as a side note you can put your "author's note" in an actual author's note.

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