• Member Since 9th Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen May 8th, 2012

MrE380


i am a book writer

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Its a story of where Pinkie has to fight her alter ego Pinkamena and in this story Pinkie finds more things about herself then she ever thought of before

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 11 )

429779 Get over yourself. People will write about whatever the fuck they want.

Dude, you really need to get a proofreader because your grammar is just plain awful.

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MFW reading that.

Seriously, don't talk to me. If he can write whatever he wants than I can post whatever I want.
Getting over myself doesn't have anything to do with this because this isn't concerning me, I didn't write this
and I was merely stating my opinion through an image.

429994 Pretty much all that image said was "BAWWW STOP LIKING WHAT I DONT LIKE".

Cool comment war on my very first story :D but I don't care what he likes or dislike just as long as others like it lol but is there really a site called proofreader? As you can tell I have been struggling with grammar a lot and I really want to improve here

430035
Well, you can be an asshole somewhere else.

I don't want to start an argument because this is not worth my time and
I don't have the patience to do it right now.

430064 It's not a site, I'm saying that you should find someone willing to read over your story and point out your mistakes. Maybe you can find someone willing to go over it on /fic/ over at Ponychan.

:rainbowhuh: Computation:pinkiegasp: I didn't know Dash was good at math!:pinkiehappy:

Green Pains?
Sounds like a delightful place to live.

Perfectly Insane
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Okay, I'll admit, It's not bad. The story idea and such is good, and your descriptiveness isn't bad either. But, seriously, you need to work on your grammar. Believe me, when I first started, I was horrible. But I improved, my stories aren't popular, but their not bad. Also, how the hell does the story have over eight hundred views, but not a single like or dislike?

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